| "A Demon's heart" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inukamisashi On: April 24, 2003 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Pls continue and UPDATE SOON!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: vampirebunny On: April 08, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP DATE FASTERRRRR lol sorry i just like ur story keep it going ur doing great! later! |
Reviewed By: cutiepie99 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story! Update soon!!! :) |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshou!Please donīt let anything happen to Kagome or at least let him be able to save her, cause he deserves someone who loves him and he can love in return!Please update sonn!Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!!!! Thank you for reveiwing my story! I really like yours! Sess/Kag all the way! ^_^* You're a very talented writer. I try but I really can't write lemon scenes. ~_~** Please update! Don't forget to check out my story!!! The Sess/kag lover-
Fluffysgirl4ever |
Reviewed By: Inukamisashi On: April 04, 2003 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! Pls continue, keep up the good work! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: April 03, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice
cant wait to se more |
Reviewed By: KANGEL On: March 26, 2003 10:41 CST
Comment/Review:
DFON'T PUT KIKYO IN THE STORY AGAIN SHE SUCH AN ASS SO DON'T PLEASE |
Reviewed By: KANGEL On: March 26, 2003 10:38 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: cutiepie99 On: March 24, 2003 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great, keep up the good work and update soon plz!! |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: March 20, 2003 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter felt rushed to me like a ... ahem quicky
i think the kiling of naraku went to fast you could have dedicated a chapter to that i think ( my opinion) but the smut / lemon was very good and i think after reading that .. no comment lol
keep up the good work =D
claudia |
Reviewed By: sessluvskag On: March 15, 2003 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story..
There should be more sess/kag stories
keep up the great job |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 15, 2003 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great story please update soooooooon!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rinaanne45 On: March 15, 2003 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Great part, can't wait for another one. Love the new look for Kagome ^-^ |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: March 13, 2003 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm
this was interesting..
Especially the part where sess allowed out his emotional admintance to loving her to her friends.
And then she sat poor inu
( i can see that, she gets mad and it is a reflex)
But i can see how it would hurt sessy
very good..
alittle angusty for me... (( not into saddness ))
HAPPY THOUGHTS!!!
but this was good,
please keep writing. |
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