| "A Demon's heart" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: me On: October 09, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story,please write another soon!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: August 03, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your story!!! It was so cute!!! I can't wait to read your next one!!! |
Reviewed By: AJ On: July 10, 2003 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good. I can't wait to read your others. |
Reviewed By: Julie K On: July 06, 2003 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a pretty good story. I don't usually read this pairing, but I enjoyed this a lot. At times it was a little confusing to read because of you short, clipped style of writing. Some more details would be helpful. I was especially confused towards the last few chapters with the added characters of Pistaole and Vyse. I didn't really get that. However, overall it was pretty good. I hope you post more in the future. |
Reviewed By: ccsinjapan On: July 02, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sqweals* oo oo!! i LOVED it!! it was soooo sweet..but i jsut wish that it didn't end..u should make a seqwel or sumthing about how inuyasha still oved her or sumthing..well either way i still loved it!! i just love reading sess/kag fics ^^ |
Reviewed By: kissy On: June 27, 2003 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i reallie liked ur fic. i was wondering how this story would go on and continued and end. the end was realie interesting 2 me. how it ended fast and yet u covered everything. very well written. |
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u go girl! A GREAT ENDING TO A GREAT STORY! ^_^ I loved it! I hope ur other stories r as good as this one! |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 27, 2003 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hell to the ya that was a graet fanfic a cheesey happy ending but evry one loves thous so its all good again grate story later |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to take more time when you write. Your sentence structure is not good. Also, some parts of this read almost exactly the same as a few other fics I've read. This isn't a flame, but someone has to be the honest witch here (~_^) If all of the reviews tell you how great this is, it is unlikely that you will attempt to improve your writing. Try reading what you write, then comparing it to a published book. You will see the differences, and perhaps that can help you improve. |
Reviewed By: Wildfire On: June 22, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the pairing of Sess/Kagome! ^_^ That is what I like best. And erm... what is up with all the Lemons..? o_O? Anyways, keep updating! I wanna read more...! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Inuma Sancton On: June 16, 2003 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i enjoyed your story
only one problem:you haven't finished it yet
write more or else
just kidding
also write more fics |
Reviewed By: DragonDame57 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was totally awesome!!! i mean wow.... that was good.. so much lemons thought! lolz... but no matter... how could u leave it ata cliff hanger like that?! continue!!! |
Reviewed By: Rune2003 On: June 11, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!I really like this story it is totally awsome!Please update soon^^ja |
Reviewed By: Mehhh On: May 22, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate you! O.O;, ok, maby i dont o.O;, but still, you need to write another chapter!! ;.;, i just finished reading all of it, n i want mmoorrreee @.@;, so... write another chapter..or.. uh... or... or.. IL ACTUALLY HATE YOU! =D |
Reviewed By: *Shichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been trying to write a review for your work for so long, but MM.org must not like me. *hits stupid computer*
Anyways, I love your fic and good luck with the whole writer's block thing, I just got over my own. Yeah, writers block isn't fun, but I find it helps to start a new story or right a one-shot *hint hint*
Well I wish you good and fun ideas ^_^
~*Shichan |
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