| "Pleasures of Business" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: ILUVINUYASHA On: September 29, 2003 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
DON'T STOP THIS STORY IT'S ONE OF MY FAVORITE PLEASE DON'T TAKE IT DOMN
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
No keep writing its not ur fault if u wrote it like another fanfic that u haven't even read. I like ur fanfic
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Title: Stolen Lines
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 09:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
If what you said in your A/N on ff.net is true, then TAKE THIS CHAPTER DOWN NOW AND DON'T PUT IT UP AGAIN UNTIL YOU'VE REPLACED THE PLAGIARIZED ELEMENTS WITH ORIGINAL ONES.
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Reviewed By: annoymous On: September 28, 2003 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you the same writer as the person who rights tunrabout is fair play? because that last chapter was REALLY REALLY similar
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZPLZ write more this is such a good fanfic |
Reviewed By: Messed On: August 24, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I'd use my member name but I've forgot it. Anywho... good story pleaz contiue!! Soon... |
Reviewed By: inutough On: August 17, 2003 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon.great lemons |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I finally finished reading all 13 chapters! And your right you, did start off kinda fast. But you made it work. Other than some errors in the mechanices of your writing I don't see anything wrong with this story. Eventhough you did make Kagome a bit weak, at least you keep her in character. You also put in Nobunaga, which is a first for fan fics. And your author's notes were helpful.
When are you going to tell us what is wrong with Kagome? Does Naraku own both of them? Why hasn't InuYasha asked yet? (He did file it away for later)When do we learn more about Sango and Miroku? If Rin is youkai then how come she can't tell she is pregnant?
Have to know! Since you had a rough time on your birthday I won't pressure you about updating. Feel better. You and fujifunmum (I'll Have Lemonade & Lemonade, Too) must think alike because I noticed similarities in your writing.
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Reviewed By: Babsie On: August 08, 2003 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
And than Kikyo just sold Kagome back to the manslave because they are treating Kaede...
Or Kikyo have a secret affair with kouga and they are waiting for Kagome and kidnap her...
And they put a speel on Kagome thats why inuyasha canīt smell the pups...
Or...
What wil hapen?
You are doing a great story, please update ASAP! |
Reviewed By: Vash the Stampede On: July 31, 2003 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it. Oh did I tell u I hate it! |
Reviewed By: kirara97 On: July 29, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it. cant say anymore than that. if you dont write soon ill die! so get to it, already! |
Reviewed By: Kagome421230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! move over J.K. Rowling. Your writing is was better. She can kiss ur and inuyasha's ass [if kagome will let go of him]But seriously this is like the best writen one i have to say. It really flows. Good luck and finish it please!!! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Angel On: July 10, 2003 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh! Beds and handcuffs! This should get interesting! |
Reviewed By: Kagome On: June 29, 2003 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome fanfic, please finish it soon! |
Reviewed By: skysong4490 On: August 06, 2003 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics i've read. And I don't usaully review unless there great. I Beg for you to update it. |
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