| "Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: ^_^ On: July 14, 2003 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is 1 of da BEST stories i've eva read!!!!! i really like da way u hab kurama's view of da past. juz c dis story 2day & finish readin it 2. 2 bad i wasn't able 2 vote 4 kurama & hiei pairin *sob sob*
o well, must b HAPPY & da only way 2 do dat is if u...
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
oops, ritin a little 2 much & is gettin hungry
P.S. u betta update soon or face da wrath of hiei & kurama!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bianka-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All in all I found this fanfic incredibly enjoyable. It contained a plot that I have not yet seen and the way it was written was not too ornamental but it was also not bland. It was a perfect meld of what was needed and what was wanted. I am incredibly impressed at your style of writing and I hope that you continue to do so. |
Reviewed By: hm... On: July 08, 2003 18:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
They say something about Mt. Hiei in Kenshin so I guess its not a coincidence.
Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(ok. i think that's enough exclamation marks.) |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 08:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm... I re read the story again and I realized the irony in chapter nine when Yusuke is sitting in history class. I had thought you were just making up the whole thing with Hiei being a mountain, but Mount. Hiei DOES exist! I'm not so sure about Kurama though. Anyway, just wanted to say that, and upsate soon, PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: HyperActivePinkness On: July 04, 2003 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!! The idea you have for it so good I read the whole story in one sitting!(just found the story today) It's so kawaii!!! I can't wait untill you up update! |
Reviewed By: JesPaiTha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so much!!! Please please update! *drools* The first kiss was awesome! ^^ Great job. |
Reviewed By: JesPaiTha On: July 02, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's the best H/K story I've read! ^^ The first kiss was wonderful!! *drools* All through the story I have either chocked cause I've laughed so hard, or cryed from the angst and most of all I've melted in my shoes. ^^
Please continue! please!!!please!! *^^* |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story on Fanfiction.net, and loving it. So I figured I'd review it here to let you know how much I still love it.
I love how complicated you made Kurama and Hiei's relationship. So much pain they caused each other, well mostly caused by Kurama. Selfishness and a cold heart will do that for you. I love Youko Kurama calling Hiei Chibi-something Kurama would never do.
Please update again soon. Such a wonderful story. I love Kekket and Dante too. Your characterization of Yuusuke and Kuwabara are great as well, they come across as well intended, maturing teens still prone to goofiness. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 11:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, are u going to update ne time soon? It's not everyday that I actually read a Yaoi fic and LIKE it, since I'm normally disgusted by and sort of M/M situation, but your fic was great! ASo I really want you to update soon, so hurry up! Just a little reminder... |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 12:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, I'll admit it... I'm an impatient little wench... but I had to leave a second review, asking - no, BEGGING - that you update soon. There's a serious lack of quality yaoi fics out there, and those that are worth the time to read just dont seem to get updated often enough...
It drives me absolutely NUTS!
This fic is easily in my top 5 faves, and if it isn't updated soon, I fear I will completely freak out... scary thought ~_^
update? soon? pretty please? |
Reviewed By: sunrissa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, despite the rough start the fic had, I'm very impressed. UR keeping to one tense, which is a major factor to any fiction. Keep up the good work! Can't w8 2 find out what's next! HXK 4EVER! |
Reviewed By: Aritsune On: June 28, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't comment on fanfics but I simply had to on this one...this is one of THE best stories I have read on the net. I love HxK fics ...especially this one!!
*falls to knees* please please PLEASE update..I'm gonna die if I don't find out what happens! |
Reviewed By: sunrissa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic, but stop switching tenses! this makes for a difficult read. past tense puts the reader into the story while present tense is like being told the story without being able to feel what the char feels. As for where Hiei got the black dragon, are U refering to the tatoo? In a fic called 'Setting The Rules," by an author named Arigatomina, she came up with an interesting theory as to how HIei got the dragon tatoo. that fic is well worth the read for K/H fans. the site is on geocities if U would like to research the fic for ideas. Nonetheless, keep up the good work, jsut watch UR tense changes. they're enough to make an englsh major scream, unless Englis is not UR primary language, then it's understantable. good work. |
Reviewed By: bre On: June 27, 2003 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a great story I enjoyed it throughly! Please finsh it I really want to know how you are going to end it. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damned be all those mediaminer peoples who only allow ratings to go up to 10! Damn yous I say!
What can I say? Every single sentence typed has touched my heart. The emotions are so raw, so real that I find myself wondering if perhaps I have become a fly on the wall. Poor Hiei... love is such a confusing emotion to begin with, but to love one that had hurt him so? Just makes me want to cuddle the little guy... *smirk*
And Kurama... all those confusing emotions finally coming full circle, only to realize that he was a big source to Hiei's pain... You mean little author you!
And their interaction with each other! SOOO adorable... The kisses they share are so sweet ^_^ *presses fingertips to her jaw* THE TOOTHACHES! AAAAH!
Anyway, kudos to you for producing such a fullfilling fic. Rest assured, I WILL be back to read the rest!! *evil laughter*
Toodles |
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