| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mitsukai William [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Cool Hamster On: March 12, 2003 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like your 2nd story,so please write some more. |
Reviewed By: $$$$$ On: March 16, 2003 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do more!! Next time do Maxwell And Sandy! |
Reviewed By: Cool Hamster On: March 11, 2003 09:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a good beginning, so please write more. |
Reviewed By: Cool On: March 11, 2003 09:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you wrote & I would like to request you that you can write more about what "Wow!" has suggested & what about humans that we recommand? Think about it... |
Reviewed By: LS On: March 10, 2003 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very intresting to say the least. Not many remember Oxnard and Pepper are a couple. I like how you have that innocent romance thing going. And the plot flows very well so far. Well, I'll see where this goes. |
Reviewed By: William the Ham ham On: March 10, 2003 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! It not only has better spelling and grammar that "Hamtaro Mating season", but the couples are normal! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Cool Hamster On: April 03, 2003 06:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I would like to hear about Boss & Cindy & something nice of the part of the story. |
Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 08, 2003 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I also forgot to ask, could you go into more detail of what Laura and Travis do? |
Reviewed By: the old, wise, and wrinkly hamster On: April 06, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE WORK!keep it up.later |
Reviewed By: mcamino [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
bravo greta great chap. Poor boss, but how did boss meet cindy i dint understand that part |
Reviewed By: The Ham Ham Outkast On: March 31, 2003 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make one where all the ham hams tell about what happened, then realize snoozers gone and go out to find him in groups. |
Reviewed By: Cool On: March 16, 2003 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Base on what I read chapter 4 story, I would said
it is quite sad because we want the story to be enjoyable not unhappy ones so I would recommanded you're to write which is enjoyable to readers. |
Reviewed By: LS On: March 16, 2003 09:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice one. That fills in some of the holes quite nicely. I wonder why this one doesn't show up. Oh well, at least those two got over there shyness. Well, there's still Sandy and Maxwell, Boss, Bijou and Hamtaro, Snoozer, and Panda left... |
Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 08, 2003 22:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now that I think of it, I don't think that Laura is old enough to get pregnant and this is a childrens anime, so why did she and Travis use a condom? I was just wondering about it. |
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