| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Brodstern On: June 08, 2003 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! :D I like this fic. It has all my favorite Hamtaro couples. Hamtaro/Bijou, Laura/Travis, Oxnard/Pepper... I love the rest of this story's couples too. Great fic. Update! Ye must update soon before thy fic readers get mad! |
Reviewed By: - On: June 08, 2003 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Egh... in chapter 11, I think you just killed my second favourite couple, and if there's stan-sandy (ew, already) then I would assume there is gonna be Pashmina-Maxewell? (I hate that idea almost as much as Boss-Bijou, almost)ah whatever! As long as Hamtaro or Bijou aren't put with any others I'm happy, after all that's the only couple I care about. Other than that, great fic! |
Reviewed By: StoryReader On: June 07, 2003 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank you for your created story & do write somemore & I had one thing I had to say is that when it's chosen it will never change because Sandy fall in love with Stan for what I think is a
switch & it's not what I really want & Boss & Sparkle part was Awesome but Boss has chosen his mate like what I said was chosen, but please write
about putting back to chosen ones like Stan with Pashmina & Sandy with Maxwell, & that's what I really hope for in next story but please write something nice & erotic, Thank You! & Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: StoryReader On: June 05, 2003 08:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
When will the next story be ready? |
Reviewed By: StoryReader On: June 04, 2003 06:17 CDT
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Next story I would like you to write about Boss & Sparkle erotic story. |
Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O
Holy sh*t dude |
Reviewed By: FictionReader On: June 03, 2003 10:03 CDT
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What's Next For Us? |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 27, 2003 08:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your stories are very nice,so please write more. |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 26, 2003 08:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope Boss & Sparkle story would be more erotic & nice. |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 24, 2003 09:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is the next story ready? |
Reviewed By: jillian On: May 24, 2003 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 22, 2003 07:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
What's next as well as Boss & Sparkle. |
Reviewed By: ahh...sweet love...... On: May 18, 2003 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I come here every day to see if youve written more, and have you? no! look, I know Im creepy, but.... YOURE WRITING IS MY LIFE!!!! Im sitting here right now, eating doritos and rereading all of the chapters Ive already read. I, mister author, am afraid this will have to get personal if you dont write more! if you dont write more......Ill kill myself....Heh heh, just kiddin, but I really am that dedicated, and being the computer retard i am, i dont think i can e-mail you, so i pray that you check you're reviews soon.
Your biggest fan |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 18, 2003 03:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wish that you write about Boss & Sparkle erotic story next would more erotic & nice. |
Reviewed By: Ahh, sweet love... On: May 17, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are SOOOOOOOOO awesome!! Your my hero! Write more is all I can say! PLEEEEAAASE write more,I've gotten to where I cant sleep at night! Whew, ok, to hyper, Sorry bout' that. You have really got a knack for the sexual writing. But... its hard to imagine hamsters with breasts... Forget I said that, it might mess up your writing. The story is flowing very nicely, and now I can't decide which is my favorite. I'm a VERY harsh reviewer, but I just cant say that there's anything wrong with it. From a fellow writer (a very good one at that) I am jealous of how you can combine sex with romance so well!(Cept'ch.9 o' coarse, but it was the kinkiest one!)
P.S. I've seen your reviews, and you need to be more harsh! Those losers are nothin' compared to you! |
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