| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shiny_Dustox On: July 31, 2003 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was great! Please, write more... |
Reviewed By: Tora-Hamu-Chan-Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, really good!!! tthe first hardcore Hamtaro lemon (that I've read) keep it up! what struck you to write this? |
Reviewed By: Orange Clown On: July 21, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have mixed feelings on some things. but I love this as a whole.
Ch.1: Short, not so well written, but I'm glad they got better.
Ch.2: Yay! Oxy+Pepper!
Ch.3: My only problems with this were the speed at which the relationship moved, and I would've liked Howdy to get Hannah, they go so well together.
Ch.4: I hate this couple like the plague, but you made it a pretty good chapter. I still liked it.
Ch.5: Not bad, it must've been fun making that chapter, since neither of them has had much personality development im the show.
Ch.6: Hahaha! Seems like something Maxwell would do. The best sex scene in the story as far as I'm concerned. 4 rounds...who knew Maxwell had it in him?
Ch.7: Hamtaro gets laid...
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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Ch.8: Woo! Snoozer gets some! My second favorite chapter. Snoozer seems like a good lover.
Ch.9: Lucky bastard...
Ch.10: So Panda likes kinky sex, Will and Kurica. Not sure who they are but nice job.
Ch.11: Incestuous Stan and Sandy, a rare couple... And after 4 chapters of waiting, Boss finally gets a mate, rather unfortunate slip of the tongue for him... Jesus..4 times last night and Maxwell STILL manages another in the morning...
I hope you continue this story, it's gotten pretty good since chapter 4. |
Reviewed By: Pashmina-Chan On: July 16, 2003 07:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is great! and it even has a plot! anyway continue soon |
Reviewed By: Saikono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
usually i think stories like these are not done properly. but, this one actually had a plot. and the plot is interesting. so, i say great work and keep it up! |
Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 08, 2003 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought the Laura and Travis pairing was good. Please more of those two! |
Reviewed By: Cool On: June 29, 2003 06:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
What's the next story that you create? |
Reviewed By: CoolHam On: June 20, 2003 06:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like you to write more stories because I like your stories very much. |
Reviewed By: none On: June 19, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a disgusting pervert. Hamtaro is supposed to be a cute show not a porn flick. You got some serious issues pal!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cool On: June 18, 2003 06:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
What's the next fiction that you going to write? |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF?!?!?!?!?!??!?! What is the MATTER with you?! Have you gotten so desperately perverted that you have gotten Hamtaro into the mix?! You sai "Hilarious Outakes!" was bad! Look at yours!!! I know I'm being mean, but, come on!! Surely you can think of something a little more friendly?!
Mikey B23 out!!!!.............. |
Reviewed By: Ham-Ham OuTKasT On: June 15, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good work, the pairing between Stan and Sandy was a great addition. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: mcamino On: June 13, 2003 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD. I love your new chapter! This is the best fic i have read in a long time, although i am still a strong fan of mating season You are great. I love the way you jump between sences just as they get interesting just like a professional writer would. Good Work |
Reviewed By: GogetaSS7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 11:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Who would write a lemon about hamsters?! That just shouldn't happen! |
Reviewed By: netaro On: June 11, 2003 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is cool fanfic, but author should DO NOT use so much space between acapits. |
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