| "The Story Of You And Me" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chibi Reicheru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon cos i love dis story its fantastic! |
Reviewed By: *Trunks* [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am NOT a yaoi fan at all, but I was very very taken into the style of your writing. I almost dont know how to describe how wonderful I feel about this. I'm just shocked. This is the best thing I have EVER read in my life. Truely the best. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 01:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
*smiles happily, curled up in the chair*
well my dear... what can I say that you haven't already heard? This last chapter was incredibly intense, but beautiful... there was so much emotional meaning hidden inside the sweaty monkey sex that I found my poor, blackened little heart a-flutterin'.... *smirk* let me tell you, that's not an easy thing to do...
There's going to be more?
Well duh... ask a stupid question, right? ^_^
Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next update, as usual!
*huggles*
toodles u! |
Reviewed By: DB Yaoi addict On: July 21, 2003 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, please, please do not make Trunks and Goten wish to be permanently Gotenks with the Dragonballs-I just know you are considering this, aren't you? I like my Trunks and Goten as separate entities, thank you very much and I like them together with lemony goodness! But I would also like very much a lovely Gotenks/Marron bambino, more saiyans, yay!
I gave you "9's" instead of "10's" because I feel like the true lemon is being held out on me for longer than I like for my comfort level, lol!
BTW, have you read the Marron sandwich series at Kinomiville.net? Another take on the Trunks/Goten/Marron trio. |
Reviewed By: Froggles On: July 20, 2003 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an email sent to djfusion:
Hello i just got through to MM.org and read the latest chapter in your epic truten "The Story Of You And Me". I really now feel compelled to email my review to you as a more personal means to express my feeling on the story. I'm going to be honest with you, i keep thinking and fearing that after each chapter you are not going to write and addition as good as the previous. Now you have finally put that fear to rest, the depth in with i got lost into that chapter is intense, so much so that when i read the very last line I physicly found it hard to swallow. You cetainly now your doing well when you can have effect on a reader. I thank you sincerely for the link in the email to the story posted elsewhere (mm.org). Thats really all i have to say on the matter except for Thank-you for entertaining me with another chapter of your story.
Yours Sincerely,
Froggles. |
Reviewed By: Lullaby On: July 19, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you can't leave us waiting like this... I guess everybody wants more, please!!! |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 18, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH GHODS!!! The hunt?! Is it the hunt?! Gah, I'm losin' it over here! *wimper* That was absolutely intense and insanely awesome!!! ^_^ I don't know what else to say except that... I NEED TO KNOW *asks very sweetly* Please hurry, please? I'll beg if I have to... |
Reviewed By: AHHHHHH!!!!!! On: July 18, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO DON"T STOP THERE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sighs happily, as usual* Life lessons are learned! How old are they supposed to be again? You'd think they'd already KNOW they should take responsibility for their actions... damn males I tell you *smirk*
Oooooo... the chase is on! At least I hope its the chase! Goten could just be running out of fear too I guess... but you wouldnt be THAT mean.............would you? *blinks*
Anyway, as always, you outdo yourself!
Keep up the good work!
*huggles*
Toodles! |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 16, 2003 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I love this! Great twists and surprises and the characters are very IC! Boy what tangled webs they weave, huh? They are in deep shit now! ^_^ I can't wait to see how they handle this one... |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 16, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Ghods! Awesome fic! Love the twists and the characters are very IC. Boy what tangled webs they weave, huh? They are in deep shit now! Can't wait to see how they deal with this one... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: teengohanluva4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 11:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really do luv this fic. you shud b proud of yourself you talented thing you!!!! Keep up the great work and do more scenes with Goten and Trunks getting eachother off!!! ........ sorry bit hyperactive there. LUV YA!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Arisu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the first time that I enjoy so much a DB fic! Love the plot and the way you portrait Trunks and Goten's personalities. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Mela989898 On: July 01, 2003 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, WOW I did not see that one comming! Wow please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 23:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
well well... they're in some deep shit now, arent they? Not only have they COMPLETELY ruined any chances of any kind of friendship/relationship with Marron, but they have respective parents to think about...
I was kind of surprised that Gotenks was so honest with Marron about the whole thing... I half expected it to just a be a wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am, then he'd be on his pretty little way... Kudos to him for such nobility, but he REALLY shoulda just dissapeared... Don't wanna sound heartless, but that woulda hurt a lot less than finding out the truth.
But anyway, this chapter was fantastic. I love the way the scene at the party seemed almost surreal... like a dream. And the way you described Gotenks all growed up... *purr*
Keep up the good work ^_^
I look forward to more soon! *huggles* |
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