| "The Story Of You And Me" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 16, 2003 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I love this! Great twists and surprises and the characters are very IC! Boy what tangled webs they weave, huh? They are in deep shit now! ^_^ I can't wait to see how they handle this one... |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 16, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Ghods! Awesome fic! Love the twists and the characters are very IC. Boy what tangled webs they weave, huh? They are in deep shit now! Can't wait to see how they deal with this one... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: teengohanluva4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 11:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really do luv this fic. you shud b proud of yourself you talented thing you!!!! Keep up the great work and do more scenes with Goten and Trunks getting eachother off!!! ........ sorry bit hyperactive there. LUV YA!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Arisu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the first time that I enjoy so much a DB fic! Love the plot and the way you portrait Trunks and Goten's personalities. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Mela989898 On: July 01, 2003 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, WOW I did not see that one comming! Wow please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 23:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
well well... they're in some deep shit now, arent they? Not only have they COMPLETELY ruined any chances of any kind of friendship/relationship with Marron, but they have respective parents to think about...
I was kind of surprised that Gotenks was so honest with Marron about the whole thing... I half expected it to just a be a wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am, then he'd be on his pretty little way... Kudos to him for such nobility, but he REALLY shoulda just dissapeared... Don't wanna sound heartless, but that woulda hurt a lot less than finding out the truth.
But anyway, this chapter was fantastic. I love the way the scene at the party seemed almost surreal... like a dream. And the way you described Gotenks all growed up... *purr*
Keep up the good work ^_^
I look forward to more soon! *huggles* |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nope - don't stop!
The boys have dug themselves in deep, haven't they? That last chapter was fantastic, like all the others. Poor Marron. Poor Gotenks too - I don't think he ever experienced remorse before... |
Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please keep writing! Not only do I love this story, but I feel the narrative (sp?) is true to the characters of Goten and Trunks. As in I could definitely feel that what you wrote them saying was something they'd actually say. And it's getting far too good to stop now! Never say die! Keep writing! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mela989898 On: June 17, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont you dare think about stopping this story I so love so very very much! And this last chapter was great I just love the steady change relationship between Goten and Trunks and now with the new addition of Marron in to the picture I cant wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe On: June 11, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my giddy aunt... they... they're gonna... apthastama...*stutters, at a complete loss for words*
are they gonna do what i THINK they're gonna do? O.o .... GENIUS! GO FOR IT GUYS! WOOOOO!!
Hurry up and write the next chapter! I GOTTA see this!
*snickers evily and purrs at the pretty mental images* |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totally enjoying this fic so far. I love how you're taking your time with Trunks' and Goten's relationship, showing the readers how it's developing over time instead of just jumping into the steamy monkey sex. ;)
The fusion experiences are a hoot!
However, Chapter 8 was amazing! Marron is an idiot to pass up an opportunity like that! O.o Of course, more than likely, she would have ended up on the sidelines cheering them on...
Your writing style is captivating; it flows so well and paints such vivid descriptions of what's going on in your fic. I always enjoy your work.
I look forward to the next installment! :) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 09:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Marron? O_O Marron is moving in with Trunks and Goten.... I smell trouble!!
Poor Trunks... he's gonna hafta check into the mental ward before too long... and BULMA that ebil creatin!! Leave Goten alone!
MARRON!?
hehe.. sorry... just a bit in shock at the turn of events ^_^
UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 22:12 CDT
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Weeee!!!! You updated!!! *glomp*
Eghads that shower scene was hooooooooooooooot *whines*
you're so damn good ^_^
Keep going!! I want more!!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, this fic is SO going on my fave list... ^_^ when are you updating again!?!? MUST HAVE MORE! MUST HAVE MORE! MORE MORE MORE! *NOW*!!!! |
Reviewed By: luvintrunksngoten4eva On: March 23, 2003 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTELY LUUUUUUUUUVVVVVVV THIS FIC!!!!! The bit with fusion was fantastic!!! completely original to anything i've ever read (and i've read a lot!!)i really hope you carry on this gr8 fic!!! |
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