| "The Story Of You And Me" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story when I found your gorgeous pictures of Goten and Trunks. The Story Of You And Me is probably the best read I have ever seen. Even despite that in the end you for some reason decided to kill Trunks, which I didn't like much because I'm more keen on yaoi. Well, yes, you created Marron and grew to love her, gave her sufferings, made her go through them and made her strong. Though, I really would have been much happier with a slightly differend ending. Oh, well, but the story is yours and I can tell that it was made with an unbelievable skill. For me it was one of the stories that in the end leaves one's soul shaken but purified. I have never cried so much in my entire life. You dealt with the scenes perfectly - it's not so easy to write in the first POV, but what you did...oh, well, it's just beautiful: I lived and took each and every breath together with Trunks and Goten. I felt their pain and joy and need for each other. I saw the world through their eyes. All emotions were open for me. Stories like this make me strugle to create something similar, something worth reading. Thank you for this. And thank you for the baby and hope you left in the end.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 16:01 CDT
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Wow I was brought here because of your gallery pictures. The story is wonderful. I cried so much. Thank You for writing -El-
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Reviewed By: Messala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
where to begin.... The yaoi part of the fic was absolutly ... WOW! The way you wrote it was so beautiful. I know Marron was bashed alot at the begining of the fic, and that we want her to find what she needs. Although I think it would have been better to have Goten die too. That way Marron could PROVE she is strong, she can do this on her own. It would also enhance the bond this fic tells Trunks and Goten having. Marron should be a stronger charecter. She shouldn't blindly do whatever people tell her to. As it was it was still a ... * whistle * well I don't have words for it. It was a (insert fabulous word here) fic.
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Reviewed By: elle (e_shinigami@hotmail.com On: July 10, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. It had a very interesting and original plot. It's sad to see that this story is over. I'm wondering if you'll do a sequel to this.
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Reviewed By: BVtBear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my. So it's done! You know, reading this when you have the ashlee simpson song 'pieces of me' stuck in your head really enhances the mood of this piece (you should really listen to that song...it's good). well, it's been good to see your baby grow, ever since you gave me the gift of the outline...I was really excited, because I had never seen such a well written outline...So of course there were high expectations of this fic. And it doesn't disappoint. One of the most devoted authors I have ever had the chance to meet...such talent. Yay for you! you shared it with us and opened a different door to the DBZ universe. Not many knew that door even existed. So...cool. You owe us one shots! people out there have a point, a good toran one is needed! what about him?! enough ramblings. thanks for everything.
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Reviewed By: angel_babe On: July 08, 2004 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, this was one of the best stories i've ever read- never has a story evoked so much emotion... i'm crying at the moment... i know it's only a story... but... you're an absolutely fantasic writer... there's nothing more to say. I loved it! (angel_babe115@hotmail.com)
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Reviewed By: top ramen On: March 02, 2004 10:52 CST
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Oooh, such a quick update, thanks muchly...er, is this Kinomi of "Marron sandwich" fame? I know how THAT ended *sulks a little* Trunks also got booted out of the trio...dang, how is this thing going to end?
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: February 24, 2004 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was great. Ive been up for hours reading this. I didnt want Trunks to diiiieeee!!!!
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Reviewed By: top ramen On: February 23, 2004 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! An update! Thank you! Ah, er, so I mean it's your choice to keep it angsty and all that, but I'm a little sorry the namekian dragonballs couldn't be used to bring Trunks back...I mean, Krillin and Chaotzu got to come back 3 times, why not Trunks? But then you've got a "to be continued" at the end of this last chapter, so *hopeful look* maybe?
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Reviewed By: Trunkten On: January 27, 2004 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best Fiction I've ever read please update. Will this baby make Goten stay why can't Goku go to Namek and use there Dragon Balls cause Vegeta said not to. Damn poor Goten life does suck. I guess death for Trunks would too. I also hope you don't make Goten and Trunks wish on the Dragon Balls for Gotenks to be forever. Once again fantastic keep up the good work!!!
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Title: HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Vegetas-new-woman! On: January 11, 2004 06:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! PLEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSSE!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vegetas-new-woman! On: January 11, 2004 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story i have ever read. Hurry up with the next chapter. Also I hope Trunks comes back 2 life. HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: MercuryGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh goodness...Trunks...and Goten... This is such a good story. Excellent! Brillant! Pure genius! Please update soon. Please! ~MercuryGoddess~
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Reviewed By: mela989898 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! just wow!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Blacksoulsistah@aol.com On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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Wow, your latest chapter was so intense, i almost wanted to cry. I felt so sorry for Goten when his new love was killed by his own sword in another man's hands. You have a real way with words. Keep up the good word and hurry up with the next chapter.
P.S.
Will the next chapters be a happy ending to the suffering couple of Goten and Trunks or will life be cruel to them both and let them suffer with out each other. Will Trunks come back to life some way, or will Goten die or be killed ( the part where you said his neck was snapped). Will the Son, Briefs, and Marron learn the vicious ruth of what had become of the two. Or will some how something good will happen and well they'll returned to their once so shortly ended live? Give a good up date. Love your writing and this story. Bye! |
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