| "The Story Of You And Me" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trunkten On: January 27, 2004 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best Fiction I've ever read please update. Will this baby make Goten stay why can't Goku go to Namek and use there Dragon Balls cause Vegeta said not to. Damn poor Goten life does suck. I guess death for Trunks would too. I also hope you don't make Goten and Trunks wish on the Dragon Balls for Gotenks to be forever. Once again fantastic keep up the good work!!!
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Title: HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Vegetas-new-woman! On: January 11, 2004 06:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! PLEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSSE!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vegetas-new-woman! On: January 11, 2004 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story i have ever read. Hurry up with the next chapter. Also I hope Trunks comes back 2 life. HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: MercuryGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh goodness...Trunks...and Goten... This is such a good story. Excellent! Brillant! Pure genius! Please update soon. Please! ~MercuryGoddess~
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Reviewed By: mela989898 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! just wow!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Blacksoulsistah@aol.com On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, your latest chapter was so intense, i almost wanted to cry. I felt so sorry for Goten when his new love was killed by his own sword in another man's hands. You have a real way with words. Keep up the good word and hurry up with the next chapter.
P.S.
Will the next chapters be a happy ending to the suffering couple of Goten and Trunks or will life be cruel to them both and let them suffer with out each other. Will Trunks come back to life some way, or will Goten die or be killed ( the part where you said his neck was snapped). Will the Son, Briefs, and Marron learn the vicious ruth of what had become of the two. Or will some how something good will happen and well they'll returned to their once so shortly ended live? Give a good up date. Love your writing and this story. Bye! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Reicheru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon cos i love dis story its fantastic! |
Reviewed By: *Trunks* [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am NOT a yaoi fan at all, but I was very very taken into the style of your writing. I almost dont know how to describe how wonderful I feel about this. I'm just shocked. This is the best thing I have EVER read in my life. Truely the best. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 01:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
*smiles happily, curled up in the chair*
well my dear... what can I say that you haven't already heard? This last chapter was incredibly intense, but beautiful... there was so much emotional meaning hidden inside the sweaty monkey sex that I found my poor, blackened little heart a-flutterin'.... *smirk* let me tell you, that's not an easy thing to do...
There's going to be more?
Well duh... ask a stupid question, right? ^_^
Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next update, as usual!
*huggles*
toodles u! |
Reviewed By: DB Yaoi addict On: July 21, 2003 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, please, please do not make Trunks and Goten wish to be permanently Gotenks with the Dragonballs-I just know you are considering this, aren't you? I like my Trunks and Goten as separate entities, thank you very much and I like them together with lemony goodness! But I would also like very much a lovely Gotenks/Marron bambino, more saiyans, yay!
I gave you "9's" instead of "10's" because I feel like the true lemon is being held out on me for longer than I like for my comfort level, lol!
BTW, have you read the Marron sandwich series at Kinomiville.net? Another take on the Trunks/Goten/Marron trio. |
Reviewed By: Froggles On: July 20, 2003 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an email sent to djfusion:
Hello i just got through to MM.org and read the latest chapter in your epic truten "The Story Of You And Me". I really now feel compelled to email my review to you as a more personal means to express my feeling on the story. I'm going to be honest with you, i keep thinking and fearing that after each chapter you are not going to write and addition as good as the previous. Now you have finally put that fear to rest, the depth in with i got lost into that chapter is intense, so much so that when i read the very last line I physicly found it hard to swallow. You cetainly now your doing well when you can have effect on a reader. I thank you sincerely for the link in the email to the story posted elsewhere (mm.org). Thats really all i have to say on the matter except for Thank-you for entertaining me with another chapter of your story.
Yours Sincerely,
Froggles. |
Reviewed By: Lullaby On: July 19, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you can't leave us waiting like this... I guess everybody wants more, please!!! |
Reviewed By: Mistress Goku On: July 18, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH GHODS!!! The hunt?! Is it the hunt?! Gah, I'm losin' it over here! *wimper* That was absolutely intense and insanely awesome!!! ^_^ I don't know what else to say except that... I NEED TO KNOW *asks very sweetly* Please hurry, please? I'll beg if I have to... |
Reviewed By: AHHHHHH!!!!!! On: July 18, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO DON"T STOP THERE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sighs happily, as usual* Life lessons are learned! How old are they supposed to be again? You'd think they'd already KNOW they should take responsibility for their actions... damn males I tell you *smirk*
Oooooo... the chase is on! At least I hope its the chase! Goten could just be running out of fear too I guess... but you wouldnt be THAT mean.............would you? *blinks*
Anyway, as always, you outdo yourself!
Keep up the good work!
*huggles*
Toodles! |
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