| "From An Alley" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was most certainly a different kind of story and as a writer you never know what is going to happen until it is over...i did really enjoy reading your story and i like it the way it is i wouldnt change anything....
best of luck
luna_night |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nice story. It's got some really sweet moments.
...but why? Since this was an A.U., why an Inu and Kagome A.U.? It seems to me that you could just as easily have written in some original characters, done some developing, and come up with a story completely your own. Was Inuyasha just a place to start from? This story, while fun to read and entertaining (which is not to be underestimated; that's the point, after all) doesn't give us any insight on the Inuyasha characters. |
Reviewed By: Jess On: March 28, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chp! I can't believe the police can be so careless. (^_^) |
Reviewed By: wow On: March 28, 2003 20:26 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm impressed with this story please keep writing |
Reviewed By: Kithkin On: March 28, 2003 00:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm really enjoying this one. I love the idea, and your style is e\xcellent. On this most recent chapter, I think the scene in the house is reasonable, I love the comforting, and the lemon was good, but I'm balking at the transition. She's experienced this huge loss, says she loves him, and bam, they go at it? I know it's generally acceptible to "reaffirm one's own life" after facing death, but I'm reccommending a long look there. Maybe Inu-chan should out up the token protest about her emotional state? It's a bit too abrupt, or so I think. Thank you for writing, it's a pleasure reading your work!! |
Reviewed By: kagome1021 On: March 27, 2003 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm impressed with this story please put more chapters up |
Reviewed By: Dragongirl On: March 27, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this fanfic is very creative, fun to read, exciting, and everything else writing has to offer! This is fantastic and I hope to read more! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Jess On: March 26, 2003 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon! How many chapters had you planned for this fanfic? |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 26, 2003 09:12 CST
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this is a great storyso far keep updating |
Reviewed By: Step of Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I hope you do continue this. |
Reviewed By: inu On: March 25, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter4 is really nice hope chapter5 or chapter6 will contain lemon |
Reviewed By: inu On: March 24, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a good fanfic, i'm looking forward for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: gackt_emu On: March 23, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Please update soon and keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Jen On: March 23, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really like this fic!! Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: ahh On: March 23, 2003 12:00 CST
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i cant believe that you ended it like that you should have written more. besides i hope that you put in a really good lemon soon ^_^0 my sisters are reading this too and the are buggin me about how long its going to take for you to put it in htere owwwww "my stupid sister pulled me bruised arm" sorry i have to go break someones leg right now update soon |
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