| "Coalescence" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mirialdo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! ^-^ -is currently trying to get on the yahoogroups list to read more- such a great ficy! in my humble opinion its in a way the "snowfields" of the YGO genre -grin- or the "long hard road" of it anyway hehe.. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: May 07, 2003 05:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Saa. *^^* YY x S x Y in the future? Does that mean uke!Seto all the way? XD I hope so...^^; The brunet is so sexy when submissive. I bet he's a screamer. :P lol continue! |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: May 05, 2003 04:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I totally love your story! I cant wait till everyone is happy together :) Because if I am reading right Yami/Yugi/Seto are all going to become one big happy couple hehe :P But I love the Yami/Seto they are such a good pair and so hard to find. Anyway keep up the good work and please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Genkisaru On: April 23, 2003 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! SetoxYami! This so so nice and well written! But Jou is being a very bad boy with all his teasing. Poor Seto! At least he has Yami to comfort him ^__^! Keep it up and write another chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: moonglaive [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I'd left a comment! Well there's not really anything left for me to say that hasn't already been said...! Keep up the good work! This story is awesome and I can't wait to read the next chapters! |
Reviewed By: maladyrancor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Masterful story! You have such control over your use of words...you spin a great story filled with conflicting emotions and suspense! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! You're a talented writer and the dialogue between the characters is both complex and intriguing.
Haha! The Yami/Yugi confrontations are so cute! Please update soon! You're doing a fanastic job writing! |
Reviewed By: Amethyest Sin and Yami Phiona On: April 18, 2003 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ WOOHOO!
Phiona: Good job!
Keep going!
Phiona: ...-whispers- Kill Anzu!
PHIONA!!! |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll never get over how great your story is! It's just another item on my list of reasons to get up in the morning! Wonderful! I've really been having a great week and I thank you for most of it! |
Reviewed By: Seto's Love On: April 15, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFULLY WRITTEN. I HOPE THIS HAV A GREAT ENDING PLOT BECAUSE THE DEVELOPING PLOT MAKES YOU WANT TO KISS THE AUTHOR. IT BE SOOOO COOL IS LIKE A NEW GUY COMES TO SETO JOB AND STARTS WORKING THEIR. THIS GUY IS LIKE OLDER THAN HIM SINCE SETO IS 15 (PEOPLE FOR EVER THINKING HE IS 18,17 BECAUSE HE IS TALL). SO THE GUY LIKES HIM AND MAKES MOVES ONE HIM AND THEN ONE DAY THE GUY TRIES TO MOLEST SETO AND SETO SUDDENLY YELLS YAMI NAME MENTALLY AND TALKS TO HIM THROUGH THE LINK AND BY THE TIME THE GUY IS ABOUT TO TAKE HIM BAM YAMI IS THERE ON THE FLASH. WHAT AM I'M THINKING THIS IS YOUR STORY CONTINUE I BET ANYWAY YOU RIGHT IS GOOD.UKE-SETO RULES (SETO BEING SUBMISSIVE) HOLLA!!!! JA |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
PHEW!
I like that you've added an element of suspense (how the future is changed and what will happen on that front) with the rapidly changing relationship between Kaiba and Yami.
And the way you wrote the two of them together was nicely done. Steamy, but with very strong hints of something much stronger than mere lust. |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good.
Phiona: ^^ -humming the words to Die Die My Darling by Metallica-
--; Don't mind her. She's an angst freak.
Phiona: Fak you.
And she has a problem with her language. -claps politely- Very good fic. I'll be waiting for the rest. |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Awww, cute and awkward first date!
LD: Did you spell that right?
Karen: Dunno... don't really care.
LD: *sigh* Mokuba was really funny. I love how he tormented Seto. It was classic younger sibling. As for the rest... well that is more Karen's thing than mine.
Karen: Damn straight! Bring on the mush! |
Reviewed By: Kiraya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
More, please! This is excellent! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 21:24 CST
Comment/Review:
LD: Hehe, Yugi in turmoil. I love it!
Karen: And he has a crush, how cute! You so have to update this soon. It is really awesome.
LD: Yeah, but don't make it too easy on them! *smirks evilly* |
Reviewed By: Solitaire and Xpyne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 12:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Solitaire: Alright--I think I'm getting pretty pro with these HTML tags by now, heh.
Awwww! Seto is so cute!!! The poor thing was fighting back a little bit of tears there when Jounouchi was being an ass in the classroom. ::shakes head:: I mean, I love Jou, but sometimes he is so...so...clueless, lol. Xpyne and I thought that part was just adorable. ^_^
And I like how Yugi and Mokuba were able to guess who their collective guardians liked pretty easily; Xpyne and I agree that it's always so retarded when someone writes a fic where two people are so obviously into each other, and the people closest to them are totally clueless as to who it could be.
Great work, and I can't wait for you to get the other chapters up...um, even though I'm reading ahead, heh heh. We love this story! |
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