| "When It Rains" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awaiting more...... |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 06, 2003 09:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
was it that Ian Mori guy that killed the girl?
great story. not too many mystery stories out there.
can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There isn't much happening yet...But I have enjoyed these first two parts. Your style of writing is interesting and holds my attention. Paragraphs are nicely detailed. I anticipate good plot development so I am eager to see what happens next.
A'nore |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Chichi's characterization is really amazing - neither flat & stereotypical nor OOC. Amazing job with the harpy! And Goku's dream has me seriously intrigued - LOVE that he got his tail back in it! Any change of that happening IRL? XD |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I get the feeling that was Bulma? (shrugs) In any case, you now have my full attention! That was one of the best first chapters of any story I've ever read. It grabs you, pulls you in and sucks the life from you until all you want is more! ^_^
Kurai: Pardon my dramatic authoress.
Naked, shameless Saiyajin men!! They make the world go round!! Especially when they're gettin' it on! (hops around happily)
Kurai: In other words..."PLEEZ, FOR THE LOVE OF YAOI, UPDATE!!!!" (ahem) Thank you.
Be not shy, you have abundant talent that must be shared!!
-Later DAyz & TAnx!!^_^
Chibi Gemi & Kurai |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: June 08, 2003 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I definitely want to read more of this. The plot is tightening slowly now and the anticipation of pending action makes me all antsy. Get out your next chapter soon! |
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