| "Shadowy Links to the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 10:52 CDT
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I'm back! Nice chapter... lol i would write more, but I'm too tired. More! |
Reviewed By: yami G-sell On: April 17, 2003 18:46 CDT
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AAAwwwsssooommmeee!!!I luv this story!!!!I check for an update every day! I like the long chapters and love really long ones!*hinting!!*I love this story sooomunch I can't even word it!!!! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 18:35 CDT
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Great chapter! She sort of reminds me of one of my fic characters...on a mission, trying desperately not to get caught in her own emotions... I thought the romance scene was good! I hardly made any attempt at inner feelings, hehe. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 14:42 CDT
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Please update! I've thinking about your fic and now I really want to know what happens! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 20:26 CDT
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Found it!
“Wiccan magick. More commonly known as witchcraft.”
I think I misinterpreted this as also known as witchcraft... sorry bout that. I sometimes read too quickly for the actual meanings to sink in fully, and I make inferences based on that. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 17:01 CDT
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Of course he has a crush if he wants to ask her out... lol! Duh, Yugi! Ok, so hopefully they can find out more about Dwenny...Oh, no! don't tell what's going to happen in the next chapter if you're not gonna update for a week! Wahoo, so...since I have the only vote, does that mean that there are going to be more updates/shorter chapters? I hope so, well, when your schedule gets back to normal. The length of this chapter was good, I think. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 14:58 CST
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Oh... maybe I just thought you did... that's ok! Good call changing her to a 'good witch.' don't wanna offend anyone by getting something wrong. I'm not Wiccan but one of my best friends is... great chapter! Just when you think you know who this girl is, she's not! Keep going! ^_^ Oh, I would prefer shorter chapters and quicker updates. In theory, you could have made this chapter two, that is: have one be Dwenny removing the evil spell, and then one where people find out that she's Pegasus' niece. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 21:26 CDT
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GAAAAAAAAAH. Dwenny's gone... Sekhmet's gone... everybody's gone!
Oh no. The fic is OVER!
It was amazing. Truly a gem. |
Reviewed By: G-sell On: March 30, 2003 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this sory alot. I'ts very cool.I can't waut for the next chapter so keep writing!!! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 07:35 CST
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No! Wicca is NOT witchcraft! I know the others would probably call her a witch, but she wouldn't call herself one! Well it's good that her magic seems to be green (you know, powers of nature...) Whatever; this is still a great fic! Dwenny is still so mysterious...who is she? and why does Yami Yugi seems to know her? Please update soon! Oh- a little inconsistency I noticed- please don't hate me- If she has a connection to Pegasus, then why is her pendant a winged unicorn? Pegasus was just a winged horse. Hmm...Cerridwen...is that Welsh? Ok, you HAVE to continue! and don't wait five days! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aerith_Leonheart On: March 25, 2003 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv IT!!!! I don't really mind chappies this long....I ALSO don't mind them LONGER*hint*hint*Write More!! I really like the way you described the character, and the mystery...and....well, everything! Like I said...WRITE MORE PLEASE!!:) |
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