| "Shadowy Links to the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 20:59 CDT
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Final chapter! (I can't believe it's almost over!)
I can't wait for the Guardians update.
This chapter was just awesome. Wonderful! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 16:19 CDT
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Oh no! What are they going to do with her?! and what's going on with the advertisement at the top of the page?!!! Thank you! |
Reviewed By: Myania On: July 18, 2003 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! i cried on the flashback bit wit sekhemet sending Yami to the puzzle!!! Waaaa! kidding, but it was really sad. plz plz plz carry this on! SOON! but poor dweeny! i think u should bring her bck into it eventully! she was kool! not that sekhemet isnt but dweeny has grown on me lol! great story, better than any ive read in a long time! Yay! Yami rocks! i'll stop there becuz im gonna break in2 song if im not carfull! yay! ahem. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 12:45 CDT
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Ooh! I loved that chapter! More!
I'm almost done with my chapter! I've written... one sentence to date. Hrm. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 10:16 CDT
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grrr... stupid gwydion... now I'm going to have to wait for you to come back from sea world before another chapter!!! evil... |
Reviewed By: yume On: July 08, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting.......but i don't think yami should be happy if sekment(is that how u spell her name?)is back cuz first of all he has no memories of her and besides he and dwenny kinda went through more adventures.what i mean to say is even though sekment is the past of dwenny,she's not dwenny and if yami really loves dwenny then he shouldn't like fall in love with sekment right away.besides,sekment isn't suppose to be here in the present,dwenny should.the sekment that yami knew is suppose to be dead.some things are just not meant to be.very confusing eh?anyways plz continue soon!^_^ |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 18:39 CDT
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That was a twist I didn't expect to happen, but I still think it's good. |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 08:19 CDT
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That was awsome! and well I don't know what else to say. And....Yeah you get the picture. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 08:29 CDT
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Very good! I win yet again! |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 04:06 CDT
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Solo_girl: Thank you so so so so much for looking at my review and actuly listen to it. WOW that's the first this has ever happened to me. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 14:25 CDT
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don't you KNOW my vote?! |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 04:25 CDT
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SG: *teary-eyed* your being so mean to Malik. Just because his yami is evil, don't be mean to him. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 16:23 CDT
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Great job! Can't imagine what her face looks like now....ugh... gross. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2003 19:39 CDT
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Great job! Even through your ordeal, you still wrote a fanstastic chapter! One thing though... why didn't Bestian stop Dwenny's kidnapper? Oh, and the English show calls Ishizu Isis. Keep going, and do your physical therapy! |
Reviewed By: Simon On: April 30, 2003 04:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can tell a lot of effort is put into your work and as a reader, I have to say it really shows and makes it better each time.If I had to guess, I'd say you have a promising future doing this. |
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