Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh!! Saad...This is pretty good, although you need to work a bit on comma-usage...Other than that, it's cool. ^^ And don't capitalize 'mother' unless it's being used as a noun of direct-addres...I mean, saying 'my mother', you wouldn't capitalize it, but if she were saying 'Mother, onichan, and', you'd capitalize it. 'Kay? ^^ This is really cool. It'd be scary to be blind...*shudders.* You wouldn't be able to read!!! ^^ I think I'm going blind...Heh. See, I've had glasses since third grade, and now I've just gotten out of seventh-grade, and my eye-sight is as bad as my thirty-nine-year old mom's...*sniffles.* I'm gonna be blind by the time I'm twenty!! That's my prediction, anyway. Probably, I'll just end up with coke-bottle lenses...^^ Hey, any chance you could, y'know, check out my ficcies? They're not much, but they're mine, and I'm desperate for reviews...I'll stop jabbering now...I'm gonna get reported, probably...^^ Heh. Keep writing, and work on the comma thing, okay?
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