| "The Deepest Disire" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: i luvinu On: September 27, 2003 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
good fanfic! sess's sword's name is spelled Tensaiga
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Reviewed By: iluvinu On: September 27, 2003 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
its a good story, but dont rush their love. one week is too fast, and sesshoumaru is too stubborn to falll in love with a human in a mere week. gud story though!
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Reviewed By: iluvinu On: September 27, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it, but please lengthen your chapters!
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: September 21, 2003 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC PLEASE PLLLEEEASSSEEE UPDATE SOON.. |
Reviewed By: adorable akane On: September 05, 2003 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought u said u'd update this fic by Wednesday!
O-well, anyway I agree with u, damn learing, why could'nt we go to school one year then be off for another?? Stupid homework I hate this. also agree that u r on a roll!! Ja Mata! |
Reviewed By: cristan On: August 03, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kaitlin you are so good at these stories. This one was so sad and romantic.Cepp ading more to that story continu it. i loved it some day you are going to be a famos storry writer.Wee you are really good seend it to me every time you updayt ok? Well tha was great see ya.
Your pall Cristan |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just broke my rule of never giving more than a nine. It is a great story. I am someone who does not cry at movies or stories just did. It is fabulous. Update quickly. |
Reviewed By: Tiger_Blaze On: August 03, 2003 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. The only thing bad about it is your spelling kind of sucks ~_~ Anyhow, I really like the way this story is heading and I think adding the 'evil Hojo' element is a stroke of genius. I can't wait for the next update. |
Reviewed By: Draco MalfoyGirl 16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was as great chapter. i can't wait too read the next one. i will try and up date all my stories soon. Please up date soon. |
Reviewed By: Kayla On: August 01, 2003 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very great you r one of my best friends |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is a great story. I like the Fluffy/kagome part. That is very rare to find in fanfiction. I gave it a overall rating of eight because of its originality, I did not give it a nine because of the spelling. Nine is the highest rating I will ever give. |
Reviewed By: Fire-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!! That was great!!! i really
REALLY love it!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jaxxia7 On: July 18, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the dedication, *blush* Oh well, the chapter turned out completely awesome. Please update very soon. I'm trying to update faster myself. E-mail me a little more often. LOL. Gotta go, update or I'll never let Sesshoumaru out of my hentai closet for ya. LMAO |
Reviewed By: Saria On: July 18, 2003 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was VERY sad. I even cried because of that ( wipps tears away from face). Why did Sango, Miroku and Shippo just had to die? I hope and pry (not really, only a fanfic) that Sesshomaru uses the Tensaiga to bring them bach to life. They find Kagome, Miroku, Sango and Shippo tell her about Inuyasha, Kagome finds out WHY Sesshomaru wanted her to leave him, and KILL Inuyasha for what he has done. Please UPDATE SOON, and I hope there's a lemon!!! |
Reviewed By: Draco MalfoyGirl 16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl it is getting good. I can't Wait to read more. Please up date soon and please when you e-mail for the up-dates please put the ULR because i hate haveing to find the story again. Thanks i love to read more.lol. great job. keep it up. |
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