| "The Hunters" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amethyst Dragon On: July 08, 2003 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konnichiwa!!! i have just finished reading all the chapters in this fic today!!! i love this fic!!! it's....what the word?...oh yeah!!!...AMAZING!!! i haven't read a fic like this in a long time!!! absolutely brilliant!!! everything is great!!! it's terrific!!! ^_^ oh, and don't even THINK about not continuing this. you HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!!! it's one of my favorite stories!!! and your fluffy moments are my favorite parts...which is most of the whole story...but still!!! that is why this story is so great!!! you are a great writer, hands down!!!! ^_____^ and the action parts where they fight the vampires, it is so cool!!! everything in this fic is carefully detailed and would probabaly make a great book if someone didn't own Yu-Gi-Oh already....but you get my point, ne???? i understand why you enjoy writing it!!! it's perfect!!! you will probably be a great author if you decide to become one!!! not in so long have i read something as great as this!!! it almost rivals with my liking of the Harry Potter books!!! i give you great props!!! okay, now for what you requested. uhh....maybe Shadi can be like Yami...it would kinda fit since he is all magic and legends and stuff...and for Otogi and Mai??? i don't think so...they should be just human...it fits their personality more. oh boy....i typed a lot on this review, ne??? *stares at all the writing in the review* O.O oh my...it's... a LOT!!! well time to wrap this up. all in all, to put everthing in a few simple words: THIS FAN FIC ROCKS!!!! ^_______________^ i can't say anymore cuz i probably said every compliment made by human kind. heh heh...okay, good luck with the rest of this fic!!! keep updating!!! ja ne and write on!!! ^_~
sayonara!!!
Amethyst Dragon |
Reviewed By: Joey'z sk8ter gurl On: July 01, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the voting thing, I vote yes on # 2, I think Jou should recive the necklace.=) Um, and I think that Mai should be a vampire and try to get Jou, but ends up with another... YURI!!! I love this fic so much, I would die if you refused to work on it anymore! =( Update A.S.A.P!!!! |
Reviewed By: rox On: June 28, 2003 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS!!!! VER VERY VERY GOOD! Lets see...I want Joey to get the eye, bandana butt to be in this and evil! Lets see...I would like Isis/Shadi and Tea/Duke. Maybe Honda/Serenity. Well, anyways, GOOD! I'm glad I found this fic! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Kiana On: June 28, 2003 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HAVE TO SEE THE NEXT PART!Please update soon or i'll go crazy!Maybe i could bribe you...hm.*gives pocky*Now write! |
Reviewed By: Sprinket On: June 27, 2003 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this fic plz write more o + don make any more pairs itz good as it iz! This is probably the best fan fic i hav eva red so plz write another like tis or add another chap k! |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and can't wait for the next part. Also, I have always thought Joey should have gotten an item. Personally I think the Eye should belong to him. Anyway, Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Shelly On: June 20, 2003 03:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Objection! I didn't read and hide...
I just read this story last night~~~
and it was great!
(even greater thing was I read through the WHOLE 21 chapters...)
I wish I could found this story earlier...
it's so GOOD~ make my life more interesting~
voting two
An item.... maybe the necklace?
Although the idea of torturing that P-thing-ma-gi-ga by taking out the EYE is quiet tempting... *EVIL LAUGH*
I remembered it was a MAJOR Ouchie...
So not the EYE, not the EYE! Jou already got a pair of powerful and attractive eyes (well.. to Seto and me at least) ^^
Anyway... I think I am talking..eh... typing too much again...(I ALWAYS DO THIS)
I'll wait for the next chapter(s!) with *move Jou in front of me* PUPPY EYES ^^ |
Reviewed By: star shadow On: June 19, 2003 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN'T STOP WRITING THIS FIC. I love this fic, it is creative and really differnt then any other fic I have read. So PLEASE DO NOT STOP.
Voting:
no Jou should not have an item, he is already a quater and has powers, that all he needs. Adding an item would only distract from that.
I think maybe you could put Otogi in as a hunter and have him with Honda, and maybe work in Mai and Serinity in. BUT only if it wouldn't distract from the main 4 pairing, like maybe as a side story. :) |
Reviewed By: Red Lion On: June 19, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ya updated! YEA!!! Hidden Thoughts Revealed was great! I've been hooked on this story since it came out! I so love it!
As for the voting, not sure. I think it would be fun with more characters, but I wouldn't want ya to be swamped. Ya are doing great with the characters ya got! And I love the bond between all of them to each other!
As for vote 2, I vote not to give Jou an item. What makes the others special, besides them being them, is that they have the items (except for Malik who is also tainted - nice add there). Jou is special cause he is a quarter and who his ancestor is. He doesn't need an item with that background. I think he is well balanced with the others' powers without it.
Okay...that was probably more than ya wanted to know. I will try to be patient as I wait for the next chapter. And congrads about finding a job! |
Reviewed By: Jadejj On: June 17, 2003 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We got to have Mai and Isis (as I call her) Isis is the one with the Millume Neckless Shadi has the two Ankh and Scales but I haven't seen him use the Scales so why not give them to Jou |
Reviewed By: spellhorn On: June 19, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luuuuuuuuuuuv this fic and I wish u would update more often. I'm sorry I didn't review but I'm lazy. he sorry ^_^;;
As for ur votes, I say Jou shouldn't have an item. and I don't care about the other caracters but if u put in Keith he must be evil, evil I say, evil
he um....yeah ^_^;;; so keep it up ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ........ On: June 17, 2003 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT ABOUT MALIK & MARIK!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't give up on us!!
We love this story!!
You have made a very original twist on an old favorite!!
We Love It!!
Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey---
are you insane? honestly, i think you may be losing brain cells and have contracted some sort of disease. YOU CAN NOT STOP WRITING THIS STORY!
do i need to repeat it? or spell it out for you?
y-o-u c-a-n n-o-t s-t-o-p w-r-i-t-n-g t-h-i-s s-t-o-r-y !!!!
i would just die if you stopped and left me hanging! i love your writing style. it is insightful, emotional, and it flows very well. i could never write the last chapter that you wrote like you did. it was written so well.....expressing all of jou's pent up emotions, fears, and feelings.
this story has a little bit of everything. it has action, humor, angst, vampires, and best of all, kawaii fluffiness with not one, but four pairings!!! barely any stories can bring together most of the cast's characters and have them fit so well together like yours does. sure, they may be a little OOC, but it works for your story and it makes it that much better.
as for the votes.....
i already think you have enough pairings to deal with, but if you think you can tackle a few more and not take away attention from the main four.....then go for it!
and jou...well he's already a quarter vamp and that's cool but he doesn't really need an item.
if you want to add characters i'd personally like to see mai-hunter, ishizu-hunter, and serenity. go girl power! ^__^;; that sounds so lame....
anyways....please keep writing! (and if you do, update soon!)
keep up the wonderful work!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^
now honestly, would i write a review this long if i didn't like your story? |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this!!! Please continue soon!
Oh, yeah, votes....... ummmm I think that Honda and Otogi (like yami's cool...) would be a neat couple. I don't see a lot of those, so, yeahhhh....
If Jou would have a Millennium Item... I think he should have the... um... hmmmmmm... *thinks* I dunno.... He's too cute to be given a golden eye!!!!! ^____^ But, it's your story and I'm voting Millennium Eye.
~Shade~
P.S.: Your bonding spells and stuff are cool! |
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