| "The Hunters" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 10:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: OMG! Yami a dog and Seto a cat. Hehehe. That is too great!
Karen: Oh, this is all so exciting! I am a little worried about Malik, being tainted and everything...
LD: *rolls eyes* I am sure everything will be all right.
Karen: You know me, I won't feel better until the next chapter. *winks at author*
LD: Oh, that was subtle. |
Reviewed By: darkdragon On: April 09, 2003 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool chapter! Please add another chapter soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Insanegoth On: April 08, 2003 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
IG: Yesssssssss more great ficcie action
Ry: hell yeah finally the Dark one got to read it I swear hikari you aren't much of a light
IG: Okay how about this *appears with big chibi eyes* AWWWWWWW Yugi and Yami are so cute and a Yami puppy awwwwwwww
Ry: Better I like Bakura evil as ever Yami as a dog is funny
IG: *no longer has chibi eyes* YEAH DAMA KICKSASS
Ry: YEAH okay write more soon soon soon
IG: Yeah
IG and Ry: Great ficcie bye |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapters! I really like this story! I hope you post more soon! I want to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 13:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Ohhh, that was scary, and sad.
LD: Yeah, but it was exciting too. I am on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next.
Karen: Hmmm, will Jou, Ryou, Malik and Yugi choose to become like the others? Then they can be together for eternity. *sighs with dreamy epression*
LD: Dear Re, she is getting like this and the story hasn't even turned romantic yet.
Karen: I can dream can't I? |
Reviewed By: "Skippy" On: April 07, 2003 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story so far. Keep going. I'm working on the next chapter of my vampire fic now. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! I liked the way Seto dealt with Jou's father. I also like when Yami finally revealed himself to Yuugi. I hope you post another chapter soon! The weird birds were funny too! That would be so strange! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Yes, things most certainly are beginning to get interesting!
LD: That was really cool! *grins like an idiot*
Karen: Yippie!
LD: Nuff said. |
Reviewed By: darkdragon On: April 06, 2003 17:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love this chapter! Please add more as soon as you can! |
Reviewed By: Insanegoth On: April 05, 2003 22:37 CST
Comment/Review:
IG: YAY I love this write more soon I wanna know about the out people and How do Seto and Jou talk without items does Jou have an item??? Yeah okay write more soon please *Her Yami walks in and he looks pissed*
Ry: YOU READ A VAMPIRE ACTION FIC WITHOUT ME!!!!
IG: Yup *smiles as her Yami comes at her but he is stopped dead when she pulls out the pointy frying pan*
IG: Okay write more soon please *Ry is backing away from the frying pan*
IG: Okay I enjoyed it write more buh bye |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 00:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Um, something's wrong with this -- a lot of it seems to be missing. |
Reviewed By: Crazy On: April 04, 2003 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was very alluring. I like it. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story so far. I hope you post more soon! Its a good change from what is usually written. |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 17:09 CDT
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*Drools* Mmmm...why'd you stop the shower scene? It sounded... nice more soon! I love this fic. |
Reviewed By: darkdragon On: April 04, 2003 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! Great story! Very creative. Please add more soon! ^_^ |
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