"The Hunters" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 15:31 CDT Comment/Review: Karen: Yes, things most certainly are beginning to get interesting!
LD: That was really cool! *grins like an idiot*
Karen: Yippie!
LD: Nuff said. |
Reviewed By: darkdragon On: April 06, 2003 17:10 CDT Comment/Review: Love this chapter! Please add more as soon as you can! |
Reviewed By: Insanegoth On: April 05, 2003 22:37 CST Comment/Review: IG: YAY I love this write more soon I wanna know about the out people and How do Seto and Jou talk without items does Jou have an item??? Yeah okay write more soon please *Her Yami walks in and he looks pissed*
Ry: YOU READ A VAMPIRE ACTION FIC WITHOUT ME!!!!
IG: Yup *smiles as her Yami comes at her but he is stopped dead when she pulls out the pointy frying pan*
IG: Okay write more soon please *Ry is backing away from the frying pan*
IG: Okay I enjoyed it write more buh bye |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 00:08 CST Comment/Review: Um, something's wrong with this -- a lot of it seems to be missing. |
Reviewed By: Crazy On: April 04, 2003 23:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The fic was very alluring. I like it. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:05 CST Comment/Review: I like this story so far. I hope you post more soon! Its a good change from what is usually written. |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 17:09 CDT Comment/Review: *Drools* Mmmm...why'd you stop the shower scene? It sounded... nice more soon! I love this fic. |
Reviewed By: darkdragon On: April 04, 2003 21:34 CST Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Hey! Great story! Very creative. Please add more soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 18:21 CDT Comment/Review: Karen: Yay! You continued!
LD: I was getting really worried there.
Karen: Very neat chapter. Poor Marik...
LD: Malik is not going to be easy to deal with... that is why I love him though! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 14:27 CDT Comment/Review: Karen: Yay!
LD: Much better now that it is fixed.
Karen: No better, just easier to follow.
LD: And Yami is a DOG! That is just too great!
Karen: I like the idea. And Seto took care of Jou. It is just too sweet! Please update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Pyro Dragon On: July 20, 2003 12:48 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was the best story I've ever read!!! I think you should give Jou the scales. And make Isis(Ishizu) another female hunter, who was converted by her mellenuim necklace. And Mai is her partner. Anyway, update again soon or I will make you SUFFER THE CONSEQUENSES!!! Wait... I can't do that. Darn! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 01:14 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE THIS STORY!! PLEASE CONTINUE!! |
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