| "Peaches & Cream" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like what you've written so far, and how you've gotten things to go along. Keep up the good work, and update soon! |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!!
I`ve read this fic on the saiyanslash or saiyajin-secrets mailinglist, I`m not quite sure, and I love it! I`m so happy you decided to put it on Mediaminer.org! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 11:10 CST
Comment/Review:
*cries*
you NEED to keep going with this! like.. RIGHT NOW! UPDATE RIGHT THIS SECOND BEFORE I DO SOMETHING SHOCKING!
What is shocking, you ask? Damned if I know, but I'll figure something out! *smirk*
Yes.. LOVE THIS FIC... love it love it love it!! |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well my twinny A'nore made me sit and read this with her...and I'm glad I did! Loved it! More soon Please! As for Winged Revenge... *snuggles and nuzzles twinny* Anything is okay between adults...*leers at A'nore --"OW!" gets thawped by twinny for hentai thoughts* Oh well twas vehhy nicely done.
Another very (wide) open-minded fan....
L'orn |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work! I love the way you've incoporated the individual feeling of each character...And the overall story was a delight to read. Well written, very detailed and even though Vegeta is a little OOC the other characters are right on. I love how you portray Gohan's initial reluctance and Goku's confusion. I even like how Vegeta is playing cupid. So keep up the good work.
An open-minded fan...
A'nore |
Reviewed By: phoenix1 On: April 05, 2003 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I first found it on a Prince and his boy, but my computer freezes up trying to access it. I then found it at a yaoi dbz ml but the ml no longer exists. But it is really good. I can't wait for you to come out with chapter 7. Bye. |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: April 05, 2003 03:51 CST
Comment/Review:
*AWW!* How touching *sniffle* I love family get togethers! And sharing a Saiya-jin Prince is definitely one of the best ways to use any weekened in my opinion! ^_^
And I love the twist about them both having Geta by the way... its just so original!!
Anyway... onward to chapter 2... or rather chapter 3 considering it goes from prologue to chapter two *scratches head in confusion* |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: April 05, 2003 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay! I've just read the prologue... and apart from me thinking that the age of 14 is a tad young for such a relationship... I still like it! Its been SO long since I've found a G/V story! And you say that Goku's gonna get involved ne? Guess I'll have to keep reading won't I? *hentai grin*
I'll review again on chappy 1!! |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: April 05, 2003 04:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, I can't handle incest *shudders* I just think its wrong |
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