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Title: Peaches and Cream
Reviewed By: SonSofia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell?!!!! What's wrong, why did you stop? Are you dying? If not then CONTINUE!!!!!!! I don't believe you left us like that! Gohan and Goku are a hot pair! (big fan of Saiyan incest) I hope they get it on. Make it really hot, will you? And let Vegeta bring his sexy ass into the picture AFTER. I hope Goku and Gohan will be alone for their first time. Maybe Vegeta can watch? Kudos to you. Great story. Please write more when you get the chance. I'll be looking for the next chapter .
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope you write more soon. This is just to good.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 16:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooOOOOoooo... I like... found the link to this story on Xero Sky's page, and figured, if Xero likes it, it's gotta be good, and it is! LOVE this fic!! Can't wait to see the scen between gohan and Goku. Can't wait to see all three of them play together either... should be fun... anyway, Love your story, hope you update soon!!!
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Title: Bravo to the author!
Reviewed By: evil_francesca [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, it's all good...from the story plot, to the characters, and they way you handle every scene from the hot monkey sex to the more angsty, "omg it's mommy!" plot. I want- no, I really really NEED to know how this is all going to end! ~your drooling fan~ Frannie
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Title: Bravo to the author!
Reviewed By: evil_francesca [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, it's all good...from the story plot, to the characters, and they way you handle every scene from the hot monkey sex to the more angsty, "omg it's mommy!" plot. I want- no, I really really NEED to know how this is all going to end! ~your drooling fan~ Frannie
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Reviewed By: Dacia On: July 27, 2004 01:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
i've gotta add my cries for more to the din. i remember stumbling across this fic ages ago and being so damn disappointed that it hadn't been completed. or even updated for so long. so it should come as no surpise that i'm thrilled you've picked it back up and i will ever so calmly sit here and wait for more, whilst, of course, sporking you covertly alongside xero sky. *cough*
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Title: OMFG bestthingEVER
Reviewed By: MistressRenet On: July 26, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally incest is not my thing...but this story? So fabbity fab fab. Wish ChiChi was less of an evil harpy but the hot!hot!sex is sooooo hot and so much fun. I've really enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to the conclusion. email me @yahoo.com if you'd like to chat...
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Reviewed By: Monique On: July 26, 2004 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very glad that you updated! I read this fic so long ago and wondered what had happened to it. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Monique On: July 26, 2004 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very glad that you updated! I read this fic so long ago and wondered what had happened to it. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Xero Sky (not logged in) On: July 26, 2004 00:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
You updated!!! I love this fic! I was just thinking about it the other night and feeling sad because it was never finished! So go go go go! *sporks* I want more angsty Goku! More devious Geta! More Gohan! I'm so happy!
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Title: Peaches and Cream
Reviewed By: SexaySaiyajin2004 On: January 18, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!that is all I have to say,I you really need to UPDATE,I don't know how many times I've read this fic,I need the seventh chapter.The suspense is killing me,I need to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: August 20, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update i like this stories Originality waiting to see what happen with father and son and do chi chi get put in her place |
Reviewed By: Mistress Vejita On: June 26, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fic!!! Very original, great job keeping everybody ic, VERY sexy scenes and excellent plot! Don't listen to what anyone tells you about the incest factor. It's not like they are going to have a child from it or are being forced and ::hello people, they are aliens! *wispers* they don't really exsist either... :: Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!! I really want to know what happens! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: KamiTsukino On: June 20, 2003 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic.This is the first story i've ever
read with a Gohan/Vegeta/and Goku in it.I also
love the idea that Vegeta's playing cupid to help
Gohan seduce Goku,and I think he's done a good
damn job of it*smiles*
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ CHAPTER 7!!!UPDATE |
Reviewed By: R~A On: April 19, 2003 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time a read a G/G/V (@_@) ficcie and
i hon. LOVE IT!!! update ^_^ pretty please with cherries on top?
Keep up the good 'n lemony work ^.^
R~A |
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