| "Peaches & Cream" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Xero Sky (not logged in) On: July 26, 2004 00:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
You updated!!! I love this fic! I was just thinking about it the other night and feeling sad because it was never finished! So go go go go! *sporks* I want more angsty Goku! More devious Geta! More Gohan! I'm so happy!
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Title: Peaches and Cream
Reviewed By: SexaySaiyajin2004 On: January 18, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!that is all I have to say,I you really need to UPDATE,I don't know how many times I've read this fic,I need the seventh chapter.The suspense is killing me,I need to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: August 20, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update i like this stories Originality waiting to see what happen with father and son and do chi chi get put in her place |
Reviewed By: Mistress Vejita On: June 26, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fic!!! Very original, great job keeping everybody ic, VERY sexy scenes and excellent plot! Don't listen to what anyone tells you about the incest factor. It's not like they are going to have a child from it or are being forced and ::hello people, they are aliens! *wispers* they don't really exsist either... :: Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!! I really want to know what happens! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: KamiTsukino On: June 20, 2003 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic.This is the first story i've ever
read with a Gohan/Vegeta/and Goku in it.I also
love the idea that Vegeta's playing cupid to help
Gohan seduce Goku,and I think he's done a good
damn job of it*smiles*
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ CHAPTER 7!!!UPDATE |
Reviewed By: R~A On: April 19, 2003 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time a read a G/G/V (@_@) ficcie and
i hon. LOVE IT!!! update ^_^ pretty please with cherries on top?
Keep up the good 'n lemony work ^.^
R~A |
Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like what you've written so far, and how you've gotten things to go along. Keep up the good work, and update soon! |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!!
I`ve read this fic on the saiyanslash or saiyajin-secrets mailinglist, I`m not quite sure, and I love it! I`m so happy you decided to put it on Mediaminer.org! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 11:10 CST
Comment/Review:
*cries*
you NEED to keep going with this! like.. RIGHT NOW! UPDATE RIGHT THIS SECOND BEFORE I DO SOMETHING SHOCKING!
What is shocking, you ask? Damned if I know, but I'll figure something out! *smirk*
Yes.. LOVE THIS FIC... love it love it love it!! |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well my twinny A'nore made me sit and read this with her...and I'm glad I did! Loved it! More soon Please! As for Winged Revenge... *snuggles and nuzzles twinny* Anything is okay between adults...*leers at A'nore --"OW!" gets thawped by twinny for hentai thoughts* Oh well twas vehhy nicely done.
Another very (wide) open-minded fan....
L'orn |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work! I love the way you've incoporated the individual feeling of each character...And the overall story was a delight to read. Well written, very detailed and even though Vegeta is a little OOC the other characters are right on. I love how you portray Gohan's initial reluctance and Goku's confusion. I even like how Vegeta is playing cupid. So keep up the good work.
An open-minded fan...
A'nore |
Reviewed By: phoenix1 On: April 05, 2003 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I first found it on a Prince and his boy, but my computer freezes up trying to access it. I then found it at a yaoi dbz ml but the ml no longer exists. But it is really good. I can't wait for you to come out with chapter 7. Bye. |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: April 05, 2003 03:51 CST
Comment/Review:
*AWW!* How touching *sniffle* I love family get togethers! And sharing a Saiya-jin Prince is definitely one of the best ways to use any weekened in my opinion! ^_^
And I love the twist about them both having Geta by the way... its just so original!!
Anyway... onward to chapter 2... or rather chapter 3 considering it goes from prologue to chapter two *scratches head in confusion* |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: April 05, 2003 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay! I've just read the prologue... and apart from me thinking that the age of 14 is a tad young for such a relationship... I still like it! Its been SO long since I've found a G/V story! And you say that Goku's gonna get involved ne? Guess I'll have to keep reading won't I? *hentai grin*
I'll review again on chappy 1!! |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: April 05, 2003 04:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, I can't handle incest *shudders* I just think its wrong |
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