| "Rituals" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 00:04 CDT
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hey! that sequal almost done yet? eh? oro? well what are you gonna call it? that way i can keep an eye out for it! ^^ well seeya! ^^
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as you wish! *hands you a badge that reads:typing a story on a shitty keyboard patch* hehehe hey, i really liked the story and i hope you update again soon cause its really good! ^^
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 21:48 CST
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I don't think I can sufficiently stress how much I adore your characterization of Wufei!! o.O whoah!! Dat sounded waaaaaaaay too smart comin' from dis Rurouni! lol. I really like this fic and it's portrayal of the G-boys. I think the Sally POV is a good idea. Keep going. ~Satisfied Rurouni begins to wander off . . .~ **SCREECHES TO A HALT** I almost forgot!! YAY! DUO'S GOING TO BE OKAY!! Oh joyeous be the day!! My fav honnie will live!! Hee! Hee! Update soon. ^_____^
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 02, 2003 18:02 CST
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Yep not much was happening in this chapter. Although I'm curious to read Sally's POV. Keep it up and update soon
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wufei seems a lot less uptight in this fic, then most.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 23, 2003 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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The was funny, Wufei and Heero tossing a coin to see who gets the bed. Keep up the good job and keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 12:07 CST
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**Nods in Approval** Nice work. Hee! Hee! **Huggles Fei-Fei** As always characterization was the best it could possibly be. Update soon. ~Wanders quickly away from Angry, Katana-wielding Wufei~
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Reviewed By: dostil On: November 19, 2003 10:59 CST
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that was a really good jod i love this fic try to finish it soon i want to know what will happen plz update soon
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 17, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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If you keep up the constant updates, the puzzling thoughts that Heero has for Dou and continue making their friendship and relationship evolve. I would literally beg for the sequel. Keep up the good job and keep updating!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 16, 2003 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Great chapter. Your explanation for the bombs was helpful. The way Heero wondered about returning for Duo was depicted nicely. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 22:37 CST
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YES!!!! People ARE still reading this. I am still reading this!! I have BEEN reading this fic!! And let me tell you you something . . . I LOVE this fic, so PEEZ continue!! ^-^ For supposedly not being good at writing action scenes, you did a pretty damn good job. Characterization in this fic is AMAZING. I like how you did not change the g-boys to suit the fic, rather that it is molded to suit the characters. **Huggles injured Duo** Conflammit!! Why'd it have to be a cliffhanger?! Update sooner than last time, lol! Keep up the good work!! ~Da Wandering Rurouni~
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 31, 2003 23:11 CST
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Update soon. I like how you have managed to capture Dou's and Heero's personalities. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: Kat1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww duo is so cute at times. And I love how you got Heero to a T. I mean, the way he is, its so like him yet not and I love that about him. I cant wait for you to update again. |
Reviewed By: Lexicon Katzchen On: July 07, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, it's so easy to bond with your charecters. They all have a very deep quality to them, well rounded with their own shares of devils and joys, which adds to the story very well. I enjoy your interpretation of Duo very much, as he maintains the charecter portrayed in the series, while becoming at the same time more whole as a charecter. the same goes for the rest, especially Heero, who you've done an absolutely wonderful job writing. I eagerly wait for another chapter.
P.S. Spelling and Grammar is wonderful. I would love this story just for that. oh, and making the plot take place during the series is a very good thing - there are too few of those, and you manage to make it part of the story, while not focusing on it too much. Thank you for writing this. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: June 30, 2003 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not a borign chapter at all. They are cute doing the dished together. |
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