| "Survival of the Spirit" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: DecoyNeko On: July 02, 2003 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! It sux that you haven't gotten a lot of reviews! *flicks off all of the people who read and don't review*
I love the Kenshin and Kaoru pairing! The way they're written in your fic makes the age gap seem a lot more noticeable so the reader can kind of feel the awkwardness on Kaoru's part. Well, I know I did at least ^^;;; I must say that your fic is very original, Ive never read a Rurouni Kenshin fic like this one before (and believe me, I've read a whole lot of them ^^).
Well, I'd like to post your fic on my website if you'd let me. E-mail me sometime if you are interested at NekomiGW@aol.com, k?
DecoyNeko |
Reviewed By: ddkktto On: June 08, 2003 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't worry about feedback, if you'll notice, the most reviewed fics are things that people jack off to ("The raunchier the better"), and just because your story doesn't appeal to lonely, sic, perverts, doesn't mean it's not good. In short, update FASTER. |
Reviewed By: wired syirm On: May 30, 2003 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thoroughly enjoying this fic, but something that has been bothering me, with all Kenshin's...activities, isn't it likely that he would have contracted an STD? Or is the stuff they ween us on since pre-k just a bunch of exaggerated truths? |
Reviewed By: WhisperingMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is interesting. |
Reviewed By: Jason M. Lee On: April 20, 2003 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*plugs up nose to avoid bleeding to death* DANG!! and i thought Komagata Yumi (AKA Sekihara Tae, webmistress of the Akabeko) could do erotic!
must admit, your's is on a slightly different level from what she writes (best example, the lemon fic "His", of Battousai x Kaoru fame). Yumi-senpai is more subtle whereas you write, er, a bit more openly. *turns red*
i have a few suggestions you could try: switch to "member" and "sheath" (or other analogies) for the bedroom activities. i know, but it doesn't sounds as corny with the original terms. this isn't exactly from experience but from what i've read from other lemons (fanfiction.net and a few other websites). *turns even redder*
last note: Battousai isn't exactly a noun but since it's a nickname, just stick with "Battousai" instead of "the Battousai". (i tend to see it as a proper noun, as in a given name, like Sano or Yahiko)
continue soon! ganbare! |
Reviewed By: Seelenspiel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, hope you'll contine soon.
still. i can't imagine why the readers at mediaminer.org never review. i assure you, your story does have enough potential to receive feedback |
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