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Reviewed By: i_love_inuyasha_so_much [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2010 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol loved it :) i read it a long time ago but i wanted to refresh my memory, its better then i remembered :D keep writing your awesome !!
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, your talent has left me sitting at my computer for hours... and kept me way past my bed time! Lol. I just love your stories! The wit, the way you keep everyone in character, the cracks at stuff in other fanfics... like in one of your stories where you say that Inuyasha isn't sure exactly what Kagome smells like, except that he likes it. I love that! So many people insist on pinning it down to something like, "lavender and vanilla" or, "oranges and licorice" or something like that. NO one smells like that, unless that wear perfume. I love how you have Kagome focusing on Inuyasha's smell in "Bottled Genius." You never really tried to pin it down to much, and I appreciate that, as well as how you accurately pegged the power of smell! ^_^ Anyway, I haven't reviewed much because I've been working on a paper and I felt really guilty for writing anything on my computer without it being school work, so... yeah. So I just wanted to let you know that I have loved all the fics I have read of yours so far. Too much to compliment, really. ^___^ Please keep it up, and I will try to be better about reviews now that my paper is finished!! :D
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic was awesome. I loved it... great job.. and i have to pu my favorite parts in here it made me laugh so bard..lol..... Inuyasha stared at the picture before looking at Kagome's father. "I see the carcass of a pig, cut in half and its guts spread out everywhere." "We could always…" Inuyasha shrugged slyly. "You know… make him have an accident…" Kagome stared at him. "We're not talking about bed wetting here are we?" "It would be an awful shame if he were to just… I don't know… walk off a cliff? Run into the pointy end of Tessaiga? Or my fist?" lol.... just thought that it was amazing... i cracked up for like 5 minutes the first time he got asked those questions about the pictures..lol
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Reviewed By: xoxStArDuStxox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rhis fic is fantastic i read the entire thing in like a day lol couldn't help myself amazing
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Great story, I have a stepdad (who I've known since i was 2..) and thank GOD we get along! I cant imagine going through that crap...anywho, I just noticed something (it happens when you read it all in one sitting...) in chapter three, kagome's mom is Ayumi, but the next time you used it (and all subsequent times), it was Ayame. Just a little heads-up, and I DO NOT mean it in a rude way. Kay? ^_-
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Now I have some rage issues to vent...
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Reviewed By: Catalina27 On: September 10, 2005 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw that was a really good story. You were right about it being frustrated. At one point i was ready to pull out my hair (I refrained from doing so) I was kinda dissapointed that the romantic aspect of Inu and kag's relationship didn't bloom at the end, but you really developed trust and deepened it in other ways, which is usaully passed over. Nicely done.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Inugirlfan1(not logged in) On: July 20, 2005 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great!!! I HATE Denji though. Anyway I loved it!!! ^ ^
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Title: OMGosh!
Reviewed By: RayGirl (Not logged in...) On: July 18, 2005 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I loved this fic! I loved this soooo much! Omg! I was so mad at denj...wanted to...rip his skin off with afork and scoop- sorry that's disgusting... Well in 5 days I've read The Price of Freedom, Soul Exchange, and now Father Figure. I'm off the read 28 days now! Sorry for not reviewing on the other stories...ff.net wouldn't let me for some reason.
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Title: Full Review of Story
Reviewed By: daous(not logged in) On: July 14, 2005 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stands up from chair and starts clapping* RozeFire, I applaud you for creating one of the best Inuyasha stories I've ever read in my lifetime... so far. And, considering that most of the Inuyasha fics I've read have been top-notch, that's saying something. The story flowed nearly flawlessly, and only got better to the end. There was never a dull moment, because I read your story in one sitting. It's rare of me to do something like that for a fic from ANY anime. Thank you for writing such an amazing story, and you've just earned yourself another fan. I can't wait to read your other stories (this was the first one).
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Reviewed By: daous [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Chapter 6 was absolutely HILARIOUS!!! I loved the part where Inuyasha was being shown the pictures by Kagome's real father! I was laughing my head off! I hope the rest of the chapters are just as great. ^_^v
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Reviewed By: erthdaughter On: May 08, 2005 13:51 CDT
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very goot story i like it -scratch that- I love it ended just right Denji was such a bastard though made me so mad i really wanted Kag to blast him into smitherins with her awsome miko powers good story anyway
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Reviewed By: erthdaughter On: May 07, 2005 17:10 CDT
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ok so i just finished ch.6 & i couldn't go on with out telling u ..... that it was totally halarius! my spelling sucks but then again ... who cares? oh i was totally dying while i read that whole therapy session! awh...it was great! write more like it.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good my dear, very intense.
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Reviewed By: anika [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story! so hurry up now and get discovered so you can live in a big house with seven computers that never crash and a servant with perfect hair named consuelo. we'll be waiting for that first book....
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Title: Evil Step Parents
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_miko On: December 07, 2004 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is also great. Totally have the evil step parent pegged. I wish I had an Inuyasha to beat the crap out of my past step parents.
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Title: Admirable
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. I can tell that this wasn't going to end with them getting married and all happy ever after. They still need some more time. It was wonderfully worded and it was an elaborate and touching plot. Inuyasha was much more realistic in this fic, as he is always in ur fics. Please continue to write, it's a shame if you decide to stop. And too bad things like this can't be published, because I think you'd be up there at the top as a best seller! Ryu Sachiko Sama
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Title: awe struck by your work
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: July 01, 2004 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am absolutely IN LOVE with ALL your fics, this one has kept me enraptured for a few hours, i barely moved out of my seat. the characters were so well rounded and no one was OCC at all. it wasn't sugary sweet in the least bit. thats why i loved it. it had grit, it delt with real problems...you are by far one of th e best authors i have ever had the the pleasure to read the works of. PLEASE continue to write because i would be EXTREMELY depressed if you didn't. =]
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Reviewed By: pop_n_fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 14:10 CDT
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Reviewed By: pop_n_fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked ur story alot. It was original but u used things that happen in every day life. It was good that u did use something that happened in everyday life but u should have used ur imagination more. overall it was a good story. It was easy to read and it wasn't confusing.
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've just discovered this fanfic, and I've finished reading it. I have to say that this is truly one of the most frustration fanfics that I've ever read, and I admit, after reading some chapters, it put me in a bad mood for the whole day. I love how they characters are all still in character...and Inuyasha and Kagome didn't even admit that they loved each other. Gosh, some parts, I thought that they would! Hehe...nicely done fanfic, o great writer! *bow*
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Reviewed By: Amanda Galambos On: May 07, 2004 19:36 CDT
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Hey I love the way u started the story it seems really good its one of my first stories on media miner Iv ever read ummm... .. my nick name is reall just my first name and some wierd name I made up I really wanted to put inuyasha lover01 but it was taken :( O well I was wonderin if u could change ur font sry but it hurts my eyes but u dont have to cuz I keep readin and reviewing just the same ..:) Ja Ne :)!!!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: April 09, 2004 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i dont think i've ever screamed at the screen so much, or so loud! i loved it! your stories are so awesome, please keep writing!! ^_^
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Title: Chanel
Reviewed By: Chanel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ur story kicked major ass! u had me hooked from the first chapter. i was like screaming at the computer screen for how stupid her mom was being. It was awesome!!!!! I can't get over it!
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Reviewed By: Guardian of Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 14:19 CST
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ooh....that was certainly one of ur more serious fanfics, but it was really good also! :) I'm think tat Denji got what he deserved in the end, that bastard! o, and anyway...great fic, and hope u update ur other fics soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Coralfang On: March 16, 2004 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good story.kinda depressing but good.anyway good luck keep writing^_^
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Reviewed By: (not logged in) Nagasaki On: March 13, 2004 01:21 CST
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i loved your story!
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Reviewed By: blue moo On: March 11, 2004 11:21 CST
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Hey, I have always enjoyed your stories, mostly as a lurker, but I came across something that has me a little concerned. There is a story that has popped up called 'The Father I've Always Wanted by 12blue12. This is the name it is posted under here and fanfiction.net. It is also posted at Adultfanfiction.net under the name Sarah. It is very similar to your story. Like the part where Grandpa disappears and the evil stepfather cops a feel on Kag's leg. Now I am not screaming plagiarism, but it is uncomfortable. My whole point is if she was inspired by your story, she should giv you credit or at the very least, asked if she could do her own take on your story. But I have read all of your stories. You are gifted and talented, please don't stop writing. I look forward to your next update of Dead Famous.
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Reviewed By: raaaaay On: March 09, 2004 22:10 CST
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wow. i shouldve heeded the warning. i was fuming mad at inuyasha for actually believing that shit denji told him! wow...im tired from all that screaming and yelling. its good she took her anger out on a maths teacher. hehehe. voicing my secret desire to severely injure my own. this was a great fic. i like your stories because the realtionships are believable. they dont just build up spontaneously. theyre slow going, and extremely frusterating. just like in real life. i like that. it makes the story all the more believable. great work. now im going to go read alll the rest of your stories! *has no life*. good luck with the rest of your work! (namely dead famous)
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 20:17 CST
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Oh mi god.. I loved this fic!!! ^_________^ Now update Dead Famous. ^___^o *lol* I can relate to this story though...My mother is currently engaged to this guy and he drives me MAD!!!....**smolder**~~LAter, phox
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