| "Father Figure" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: InvisibleRain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dam now with the twins... that was just nasty x_X' But the part with the joint therapy was great XD' Keep this one going ;) I like ^.^
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Reviewed By: danaiguess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more soon!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ren On: June 29, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good and very intresting hope to read more soon |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: June 09, 2003 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i figured you were english right away. ^_^ my uncles all live around London.
the story rocks. it's not often you see an original idea that isn't stupid or involves ridiculous sex scenes that serve no purpose besides getting the author off, but readers could have done without. thank you. keep this one going. |
Reviewed By: Lex On: June 06, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give everything a 10! This story is SOOOOO good! WE WANT MORE CHAPTERS! Update soon! Great plot, this story is very original! I love it! Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: AnkukoTenma On: June 05, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE THE STEP-DAD!! He must die!!! But then there wouldn't be a story now. Dang! It is very good very very original. I just can't wait for the next chap. to out and I hope that it is very soon too! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that step father strait to hell...grrrrrrrr this story has me so angry I can't wait for that guy to get whats coming to him...*snarl* If I was in Kagome's place I would have run stairt for the well, no way in hell would I let that ass seperate me from Inu Yasha grrrrrrr...~_^ Your doing a wonderful job with this story, you got me all made (which means you made me feel the emotions that Kagome is feeling) which is what a good story should do...please update soon (mediaminer needs to fix there site too) if you haven't put this story up on FanFiction.net you should consider it |
Reviewed By: me! On: April 29, 2003 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow....i love this fic....denji should do something really horrible 2 kagome so inuyasha will kill him and then inuyasha and kagome will live happily ever after..... yea i dont know what im smokin either so dont ask...... |
Reviewed By: SakumaRyuichi On: April 27, 2003 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEE!! i don't normally read stories off of Mediaminer (which i should) And this story is really really good. I could actually see what you were writing. And that is how i can tell if it is a good story or not. And I found parts funny. Like with kagome's granfather pointing to his watch and Inuyasha say's starting tomorrow. I thought that was great that there was humor in this!! so drop me and email when you update! SakumaRyuichi31@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: sakura2649 On: April 21, 2003 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello!!!!as you may know...or not.. I'm also the sakura2649 that reviews your stories in fanfiction.net!!! when i saw the name mediaminer.org on one of your fics, I got curious so I went here... I'm surprised you could also review a story so I decided to review it again!!!
See how many people love your story?! SO please update it!!!! as well as your other stories!!!!
hehehe...I wish you visit this site often. In Fanfiction.net, you already updated until chapter 12 and here it's only chapter 4!!!! But update there before here please!!!!
~sakura2649 |
Reviewed By: Rin_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!!!! Rozefire's back!!!!!! *hugs Rozefire*
I've been reading your fics, but my computer won't let me review.... -_-;;;;; STUPID COMPUTER! *kicks computer* but now I can! ^__^ yay!
so anyways, I can't tell you which fic I love the most cause they're sooooo good! But I like this one and , although I really want to react like all the other readers/reviewers do and scream UPDATE!!!!!! I don't think I should. But take your time ^__^ just not TOO much time ^__^
So....need an editor? Only one person wants me to be their editor, but I LIKE editing, so please consider my offer! Thanks!
*bows*
Rin_chan
PS: my e-mail(card!heehee ^__^) Sesshys_Rin@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: mei-mei-chan On: April 15, 2003 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its great! hurry up and update it k?!?!
-mei-mei |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOH this is cool |
Reviewed By: jenny On: June 15, 2003 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is really good, but can you finish it here and not at fanfiction because i cant find it there. |
Reviewed By: Liyah-chan On: April 13, 2003 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea of this story so far update as soon as possible
Email Me at: LIYAHyounggirl@aol.com |
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