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Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 19:33 CST
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Eeew... poor Kagome. I really feel bad for the girl. I hope life isn't this sour the whole time that dad-wanna-be is around. Good chapter, otherwise. I noticed, I think, twice, where you used 'you' instead of 'your', but that was the only thing. ^_^ I do hope everything turns out happy in the end, but I'll take it as it comes... *sigh*
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Title: What a start! Ch 1
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 19:09 CST
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Well, I finally got around to reading this fic. This is quite a start! I love the idea that Kagome's dad found someone so absolutely cool for a fiancee, and I'm really quite amused to find that Mrs. Higurashi, as nice as she is, found a man with a 'behind-the-scenes-mean-streak'. Scary. She always did seem to be the 'gullible' type.... ^_^ I hope things don't get THAT bad at home, but I guess I'll just have to see by reading on...
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 12:35 CST
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That was an odd twist...Very odd...Poor Inu...^_^ That was funny. UPDATE SOON DUDE!!! Good fic, so good I can't rate it...
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Reviewed By: A happy Reviewer On: January 21, 2004 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow oh wow. I can't believe I started this fic thinking it was done and you leave me with a hangover...haha decided to leave what I wrote but I meant a hangcliffer. Woo boy, I'm tired. Need to get some sleep. I don't think the word is even hangcliffer. Ah well, excellent fic. You're an excellent writer and I'd love an update ^^ You have so many incredible fics, mostly AU and I prefer the canon, but I really do love your Dead Famous fic. Will review next time. Do you read Harry Potter? Do you write fiction for them? (*cough D/G cough*) Keep on writing. You're awesome man. - A happy reviewer
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, update soon!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey good fanfic but were the hell is the rest of it i thout i finished all your fanfics and i came across this one and how come u last updated in June huh u just like keeping up the suspence don't u humf! well plz update your keeping me on pins and needles. pretty plz!
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Reviewed By: Camellia On: December 29, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original fanfic. I love it ^.^ Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: INU ROX [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really bloody good! Anyway, my only comments is that maybe Denji should be abusive? That seems like what you're leading up to, but I'm not sure still. Maybe Denji has to be REALLY exasgerated. Although, I don't like the mother's role. That's the only thing. She's to evil and conforming if you know what I mean. I mean, Kagome's mother is usually so nice and plesant, she really doesn't deserve to be treated like a bitch if you know what I mean...LATER...LATA-INU ROX
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Title: Father figure
Reviewed By: Animated Psycho On: December 29, 2003 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Kym On: December 28, 2003 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! My friend was making one kinda like it....sort of.......a little. OK, anyways, update soon please!! ~*Kym*~
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! your story is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSS continue.... but if you don't have enough time it's ok:P i just want to see wut happens at the end
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Reviewed By: Kccranfield On: December 07, 2003 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please! Please! Pretty Please update. This was wonderfully delightful to read. I laughed so hard at the end.
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Reviewed By: aoimashin On: November 26, 2003 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! : )
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool ur english, I'm not alone. and the story is so good, and funny. I like the therapy thing,cool
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