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"The City by the Bay" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ]
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 Reviewed By: Phoebe  On: August 03, 2004 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating you r story. You are one of my fav writers and I am sorry to hear about your story being plagarized :( It makes me sad :( Dont give up!! I love oyur work and look forward to reading it some more! email me any time ! rorey22@aol.com I would love to hear from you
 Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (does she ever log in?)  On: August 03, 2004 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*giggles* That was too cute! Well, the ending. Not poor Suikotsu's slipup. *lol* Ban got what he deserved. *grins more* Jakotsu is the sweetest. Fukafukashita is so CUTE... Fuka likes Sesshoumaru. :) Well, respects, for now. Wow, I just love it when you reveal more about Sess. (I just love him more and more...:) *blinks* He saw her before??? Wow! That is too cool. *grin* I have this thing about seeing people once... and then meeting them/getting to know them. You think, "I'd like to get to know them," and often wish you had more time. Sesshoumaru is so lucky to get a chance like that. ^_^ (He almost knows how I felt in May...;) I can't wait for more, and I'm glad you finally updated. (Was it really almost a year since your last update?) I hope this review finds you well. Take care, Eri. Janelle.
 Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in)  On: August 03, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ya! You finally updated. I do hope you continue your story.
 Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, I'm so glad you finally updated. Please, please, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Flare-Chaa  On: August 02, 2004 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good so far. ^^ I hope you can update really soon.. -Clings to the story-
 Title: You are back, Yay
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A perfect 10. I am glad you are back writing your stories. I hope to see more soon. This story has been going great. As have your others. Sorry about your story being stolen. Nothing is worse than that. Well I will be looking forward to more. Later
 Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I visited San Francisco just last summer, and I have to say, the City has captivated my imagination and a part of my heart ever since. With your smart, easy-going writing style (and a killer setting :-), "The City By the Bay" breaks the mold of fanfiction superiority. Phenomenal work-I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings!
 Title: i've missed your fics!!
Reviewed By: yuki (it's really yukiko3 though) [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 10:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you're back...well kinda. Please update all your fics soon. I've really missed reading them and am anxious to know what happens next in all of them. Thank you so much for writing such great fics...i'm having problems finding ones i like and yours are always so good and i know that i won't be reading some weird ones. Thanks again!!
 Reviewed By: okibi  On: July 23, 2004 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow! this is an amazing fic! i cannot wait until you update!
 Reviewed By: rebxl [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2004 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE GRACE US BY UPDATING!!! PUHLEASE *giving author pusy n boot eye from shrek 2* 8-}
 Title: ?
Reviewed By: MoonDiva  On: February 22, 2004 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I luv this story. But you havent updated in like FOREVER. please update, and when you do, continue to update until its finished!! Ur still working on this right>>? I hope you are bc i will be mad if you arent. Great story!! please please please update
 Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2004 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Most interesting story! I absolutely love it. I hope you'll update soon.
 Reviewed By: trihn  On: December 16, 2003 01:13 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i absolutely adore this fic. i thought ou had stopped updating at some point, but anyways, keep it up. pdate a.s.a.p, please!!
 Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000  On: December 09, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Jumping up and Dowm* PLz update Sooooooooon OK
 Reviewed By: SpringSakura07  On: December 06, 2003 21:13 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you did a great job. i also like your story "The Hunt for the Shikon no Tama" a lot too. i really hope you update soon. you have a lot of potential in your writing skills. sorry for my bad grammer and spelling, i've just kind of been sleep deprived along with babysitting 5 kids at once. lol. anyways, UPDATE SOON!!!! good luck with the rest of your stories too!
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