| "The City by the Bay" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: sesshou's_baby's_moma On: July 02, 2003 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that chp.4 was the best! i thought that i read ur almost best wehn i read "a demon should act like a demon" but when i read "city by the bay" it was even better(if it was possible) can't wait til' chp.5! lol! ttyl! courtney,fl |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! It's about time!! I've been checking my inbox multiple times, daily, since you said you'd be updating this. ^.~
*grings* Rin is Sess's half-sis... how aDORable!!
*giggles and cheers as Sess destroys the mouse* Go Sess! *chanting* Kick-his-ass...kick-his...ASS!!! what a bastard... GRRRR!!!
*blinks* It's "that easy" to make butter? Huh. Prooves just how little (nothing) I know of cooking or food.
*ROFLMFAO* Don't tell me Jak has a thing for Sess... not that I blame him. ;) AND Sango!?!? *lol* I bet I drooled more than THEM!!! :D
“Oh my gosh! Forget the other one, pick him, pick him!” Jak cried out excitedly.
*rolls on floor somemore* I SOOOO agree!!
"So… when do I move in?" *faints*
"A triumphant grin transformed the young man's face, giving him a younger, carefree look." *melts*
*blinks* That was THE ... BEST email tag session I've EVER read in a fic!!!! (actually, the first... but the BEST!!!;) I found both of their responses realistic and refreshing... as well as flirty for them. ^_~ Sess's attitude/reactions were the BEST!!!
Though I had to wait for this (impatiently)... I'm SO glad I stayed up to read/review this when I finally saw the update email in my inbox!! ^^ (Though people have said it to me... YOU deserve a rating greater than 10 for this chapter!!:)
Sess needs a car!?!? Hmmm... (cars are important in stories because they give personality insight)... something roomy. (can't remember how often he's on business in SanFran) Would "S" rent? Probably. But I think he'd be rich enough to just BUY it. ;)
Personally, I think he'd pick a neutral color (a black or silver), but I don't know. (I like bright colors for cars, really; blues and reds). A color that signifies POWER... maybe.
I'd say give him a sports car, but... nah. (he doesn't need to compinsate;) Kag wouldn't be impressed with it. (If I were kag and could have more than one car, I'd have a mini or two and a... maybe a benz convertible. *lol*) Whatever car you pick for him... it needs to be able to hold a 6'+er comfortably. Acura? *shrugs* (he might like suv, but I don't care for them. too trucky) I know NOthing of new cars... just something roomy/powerful that is still sexy. (it HAS to fit his personality!!;) Maybe something older... hmm... *the debate will continue forever until you decide*
*shakes head at words/behavior* See what happens when I read/review just before I got to bed? My mind is on a one track train only to switch track again and again... I can't think, now. O.o
Write more!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: alexis On: June 30, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I so love this story! I can't wait to read what happens when they go out for lunch! PLEASE update soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: MoonBunny14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to write more?!?!?!?!? UPDATE MORE OFTEN!! also what is the name of your site? Great story! Update this story and your other stories! they're great!! UPDATE! ASAP!! |
Reviewed By: MoonBunny14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to write more?!?!?!?!? UPDATE MORE OFTEN!! also what is the name of your site? Great story! Update this story and your other stories! they're great!! UPDATE! ASAP!! |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YES!!!!
Another chapter!!!!! Wohooooo!!!!!
Ahem.
Just wanted to say that I enjoyed this one as much as the others, as usual!
And Kagome was right, Sess IS a little sure of himself, but that\s okay, he\s hot as hell!!!
Oh, and my dear keyboard have gone completely nuts for some reason, thus the strange \... *sigh*
Take care and hope you\re having a nice day over there!!! *hugs* |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* So Sessy's a gentleman?? *calms heartbeat* That hand thing totally blew my mind. O.O I did a double take and had to reread it. Sessy Sessy Sessy, you should know not to mix business with pleas-uh! *lol* Whoo hoo! Things are getting hot. *he he he* I loved that he took her advice. ^_^
*sniffles a teensy bit* Poor Ban... I was starting to like him. But I'm glad she was honest with him. She has more guts than most of us.
Write more!! I'm going to read the "Kagome's Second" prologue next. (I probably should have read that first... now all I wanna see is Sessy!!:)
Oh, I'm not sure, but I may have seen a couple errors. I can't remember them, though, so I still gave you a 10. (since I probably just imagined it;) Happy writing, and good luck with school!! ^_^ (I'd tell you to work on school stuff first... but I never did-- that was MY problem.) |
Reviewed By: Animegurl On: June 14, 2003 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please make chapter 4!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: lea On: June 12, 2003 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great new chapter! i love it so far. write more, and tht's all there is to say! |
Reviewed By: kagura-hime On: June 10, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i think your storys really good, & that u houd keep it up! i hae a tory up o ff.net, & i know sometimes its hard to update alot, o i wont threaten u, & anything like that to update, its just PLEASE i REALLY wanna know what happens, im hooked on your story! & a demon should act like a demon, too. i havent had a chance to review that, im so sorry! well, anyway, keep up the good work! ja ne! always~kagura-hime |
Reviewed By: RiverDaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't sure if I would like this story when I read the description, but I've enjoyed it so far. Definitly a different kind of Inu Yasha story, but also really good! I keep thinking of Fushigi Yuugi, with all the people wanting Kagome instead of Miaka. Hehe... I hope you continue! :) |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* Even though Sesshoumaru and Miroku aren't getting any... at least Kagome isn't that unlucky! ^.~
*snickers* Hot damn... I LOVE love-triangles!! (more like a love... paralellagram when Sess gets in the picture;)
Umm... *feels like an idiot* That was a lot of information to take in at the beginning of chapter2, but I think I managed-- despite the fact that I know nothing about the 3brothers beside what I learned in this chapter. *sweatdrops*
I can't wait for more!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: lil rach On: April 27, 2003 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this story and where it takes place keep writing!! i luv it! :) |
Reviewed By: lea On: April 26, 2003 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
god, just write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: lea On: April 22, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is quite different from your other story, but i really like it. your really doing a great job, i can;t wait until another chapter comes out, and write fast, or ill s-s-star t-to c-c-c-cry!!!! wwaaaaaaaaaaa!! just kidding!nah, but please, keep writing!! |
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