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"The City by the Bay" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ]
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 Reviewed By: Flare-Chaa  On: August 02, 2004 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good so far. ^^ I hope you can update really soon.. -Clings to the story-
 Title: You are back, Yay
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A perfect 10. I am glad you are back writing your stories. I hope to see more soon. This story has been going great. As have your others. Sorry about your story being stolen. Nothing is worse than that. Well I will be looking forward to more. Later
 Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I visited San Francisco just last summer, and I have to say, the City has captivated my imagination and a part of my heart ever since. With your smart, easy-going writing style (and a killer setting :-), "The City By the Bay" breaks the mold of fanfiction superiority. Phenomenal work-I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings!
 Title: i've missed your fics!!
Reviewed By: yuki (it's really yukiko3 though) [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 10:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you're back...well kinda. Please update all your fics soon. I've really missed reading them and am anxious to know what happens next in all of them. Thank you so much for writing such great fics...i'm having problems finding ones i like and yours are always so good and i know that i won't be reading some weird ones. Thanks again!!
 Reviewed By: okibi  On: July 23, 2004 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow! this is an amazing fic! i cannot wait until you update!
 Reviewed By: rebxl [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2004 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE GRACE US BY UPDATING!!! PUHLEASE *giving author pusy n boot eye from shrek 2* 8-}
 Title: ?
Reviewed By: MoonDiva  On: February 22, 2004 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I luv this story. But you havent updated in like FOREVER. please update, and when you do, continue to update until its finished!! Ur still working on this right>>? I hope you are bc i will be mad if you arent. Great story!! please please please update
 Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2004 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Most interesting story! I absolutely love it. I hope you'll update soon.
 Reviewed By: trihn  On: December 16, 2003 01:13 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i absolutely adore this fic. i thought ou had stopped updating at some point, but anyways, keep it up. pdate a.s.a.p, please!!
 Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000  On: December 09, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Jumping up and Dowm* PLz update Sooooooooon OK
 Reviewed By: SpringSakura07  On: December 06, 2003 21:13 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you did a great job. i also like your story "The Hunt for the Shikon no Tama" a lot too. i really hope you update soon. you have a lot of potential in your writing skills. sorry for my bad grammer and spelling, i've just kind of been sleep deprived along with babysitting 5 kids at once. lol. anyways, UPDATE SOON!!!! good luck with the rest of your stories too!
 Reviewed By: dragonflyelj  On: November 29, 2003 01:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is my first time on MM.org, I usually am on AFF.net, purousing through the titles, yours caught my interest, and I am glad it did, I read all of the chapters you have posted, and you really hooked me, I want to read more!
 Reviewed By: D.d. [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 28, 2003 21:22 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
a most awesome chapter! i'm happy that you updated, i really love this fic, yes, i very much do! continue soon! D.d.
 Reviewed By: inuphoria  On: November 28, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i think sess is really developign an inufatuation for kagome.
 Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 28, 2003 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad your back! *YAY* I've been waiting for an update, its seems like forever! Another wonderful chappie, and I hope you find some time soon to update! Can't wait. ~mandi evilyungone@yahoo
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