| "Naming the Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 11:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a fun fan fic, but you seem to have stopped, are you planning on continuing? You should, it's great!
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Reviewed By: AmarinRose@aol.com On: April 30, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting here, any chance of a continuation?
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Reviewed By: person6 On: January 08, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* that is such a cute fic! I really think you should continue the fic, i really want to see some MxR fluff adn maybe a lemon...*drools* anyways, really well written really original, i want to know what's up with yami no malik, and yami no bakura! Wow, what a psycho...not that's that a bad thing...anyways, i think your really creative for putting in the "ancient egyptian" words...they sound athentic to me...anyways, i hope you update, ill come back and review all the chapters...promise!
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Reviewed By: Victoria [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this, The "Not exactally the 'Dada, I'm gay' at Christmas that he had thought of" was funny.
You have good details and that candle was hilariouse!
And thank you for having Ryou a virgin, lots of fic writers just have the philosophy "If they're in love...then they should have sex... ya!" thank you for having him wait, it's very befitting of his character.
Can't wait for more, Ryous mortification is so funny!
Victoria |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 07:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
*hentai grin* This was really, really good! I loved the thing with the candle actually watching them and stuff! |
Reviewed By: Holly Trest On: July 01, 2003 19:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story was great! I couldn't stop laughing. You so have to update this story soon! |
