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Reviewed By: mandapanda On: April 26, 2004 00:52 CDT
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As fun as lemons are to read and write I am very happy you left the chapter like that, sometimes you can have the intimacy without the sex and still be effective good job.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 22:09 CDT
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I completely understand about you not wanting to take away from the improtant part of the story, really I do. I promise!!!! Now please can we see the next chapter!?!?!?!?!? I really liked this chapter it was so well written and I was just so happy to get an update from you. Where were you? I thought you had left poor little me to twist in the wind with not knowing what was going to happen next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OOPS
Reviewed By: SwtRose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 21:23 CDT
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You're back.........yeah.......thanks we will not lynch you for your stopping point, just don't let it happen again.. !!!!! love the bath scene Rose
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 16:59 CDT
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That was pretty good! I felt so bad for Kagome though...she was just so shy around Inuyasha...oh well I loved the chapter so please update again soon when you can! ^_^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 16:02 CDT
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this is a good fanfic very good please please please update soon
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Reviewed By: Missymelissa On: April 17, 2004 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is truly amazing, i would be ecstatic if you could write another chappie for everyone to read soon! Keep up the extrodinary work! Sincerely, *Missy*
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more soon please. It's so good please write more.
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Reviewed By: queen of hell 225 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfic its sooooooooo goood. your a really grat writter. When r u going to post the other chapters ill bet there going to be just as good as the other ones.
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Reviewed By: queen of hell 225 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfic its sooooooooo goood. your a really grat writter. When r u going to post the other chapters ill bet there going to be just as good as the other ones.
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: whats with the titles
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me (not signed in) On: March 17, 2004 23:42 CST
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you must uyp date soon please!!!! i love the story it is so good no its great and a million words that mean great or good to....up date
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:58 CST
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That was a cute chapter!!!!!! And soo funny with Hojo and she was crying and trying talk and Inuyasha didn't know what to do and he was staring at her stomach!!!!!!! Sooo cute!!!!! I wonder how he's going to act when her stomach gets really big!?!?!? Update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady On: March 16, 2004 03:44 CST
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Fun to read! Thanks for sharing! One note on grammar: "sense" is mis-spelled as "since" twice towards the bottom of this page.
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Title: Write more please
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic.When are you going to write more. I want more.This is best fan fic ever!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 20:30 CST
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I'm so glad you finally updated!!!!!!! I love this story, and since she said she was a little young to be getting married I would think about 17. Update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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