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Reviewed By: angelofdiamonds(inuchan) On: February 24, 2004 15:31 CST
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this is great! and i'd say she's about 17
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 00:20 CST
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Hello...uh, i think that kagome is probably around oh 17 years. dont know why, but anyways. finally got back to reading this fic. i guess that this review is more to ask you to keep up the good work, since i cant really think at the moment. oh well, hope kagome does start feeling better, and shame on sango and miroku for spying. they really do seem to have a habbit of doing that, although shippou usually accompanies them...but oh well. wow, guess i actually did have something to say. later.
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: February 01, 2004 14:54 CST
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And forgot to say that since InuYasha (hanyou) and Kagome (human) The baby will be only a quarter demon... so... it wouldn't be exactly like InuYasha... or any other hanyou....
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: February 01, 2004 14:51 CST
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Great Chapter! I was waiting patiently, and I am glad you are getting comfortable or whatever!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 13:01 CST
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I'm so glad your back!!!!!!!! Inuyasha shouldn't care what other peopl think of his relationship with Kagome, I'm sure she doesn't and why is he mad at her now??? Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Irrel (not signed in) On: January 15, 2004 19:21 CST
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why did you stop?! it was getting good!!! =) I love this!
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Reviewed By: SleepySango [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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no offense... but it's "youkai," not "youkia." If you're going to use Japanese, use it properly. Mangled words interrupt the flow of narration, and are just irritating as hell. Not as bad as when people pepper their fics with Japanese that has no place and is grammatically fucked over, but still, it's best to make sure you're doing everything properly. Just a heads-up on the proper spelling.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 09:43 CST
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That chapter was so sweet and romantic!!! Pllease update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 21:36 CST
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I've been waiting a long time for you to update this story, just one little chapter come on
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update sooooooooon
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Reviewed By: tinycowz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more, Write more!!!!!! I am so in love with this story. Great plot, super writing. Not a cliff hanger but it draws you in, makes you invloved with the people. Wonderful style. Please hurry with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lxia On: September 23, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS ABOUT TIME!!! I was begining to think you had abandoned this fic. Now to make up for MONTHS of no upadating you gotta update a lot! PLEEEESE!
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Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great !!
Loved it !!!
It's wonderful !! go on !!
waiting for the next chapter^^
Kirisame ^.^ |
Reviewed By: EarthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok iknow i shouldn't be laughing this hard but that was funny an also very eduational story...but i can't stop laughing sorry it was a rell ygood story though |
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