| "Yusuke's Birthday" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: None Of Your Fuckin' Business On: March 25, 2004 13:57 PST
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Um...for you Shadow, I'd like to state that I am female and a am a sorry bitch who hated the story. I would please like you to fuck off since you enjoyed the chapter so much and shove it. I'll have you know that it is my right to say whatever I want about the story and I understand that it is your right to insult me. But please, if you're going to insult me please do it right! I don't see how I am the only person flaming the story, but I guess that's alright, it's more fun by myself. Fuck you and peace fuckin' out!
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Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 07:23 PST
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As for the person that flamed you don't listen to him, he is just some bored bastard that did'nt like you story.
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Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 23:04 PST
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Well that was a chapter to remeber
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Reviewed By: None Of Your Fuckin' Business On: March 11, 2004 13:43 PST
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For the person who hated 'that bitch Keiko' you can shove it up your ass!
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Reviewed By: None Of Your Fuckin' Business On: March 11, 2004 13:39 PST
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Hello. I'd like to say that there are a few things wrong with your story... 1. It's not Koenma's "adult" form. It's a teenage form. 2. I think you are mistaken. It's "testacles" not "tentacles"... 3. Yusuke wouldn't get tired running to the hospital. Also... 4. Yusuke is not a slimy horny bastard who masturbates in front of a screen. 5. Yusuke has a sense of justice and wouldn't enjoy watching innocent girls getting raped. 6. During the run to the hospital he was so out of character it wasn't funny! 7. Keiko is not a dirty slut. 8. Yusuke wouldn't rape Keiko if Yusuke asked her to. (But Keiko wouldn't ask him to in the first place.) 9. Koenma isn't a slimy horny bastard who masturbates in front of a screen. 10. Even if Koenma had a crush on Boton, being the prince of Spirit World, concidering that he is her employer, work would always come first. 11. You hint at Shounen Ai with Boton's gay fantasies. Kurama and Hiei are not gay. Period. Now I stopped in the middle of chapter 3 because your story is completely stupid. So you can have it put shortly...your expirimental Lemon was a complete disaster. With Fucking Love, None Of Your Fuckin' Business P.S. And one more thing...how exactly do you know what cum tastes like. I mean, with a mind like yours, when did you lose your virginity, because I highly doubt that you haven't yet. Peace Fuckin' Out
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 15:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you finish the story I realy like reading the story.
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Reviewed By: hottie On: February 26, 2004 18:06 PST
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can u update faster this story is real good and u stop it a a raely good place so pease update
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Reviewed By: okasa-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 09:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The rape fantasy sequence was excellent, the way both Yusuke and Keiko kept in mind that it was a fantasy was very sweet. So when do we get the Botan, Koenma, and Kurama chapter?
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Reviewed By: KuramandHiei4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was very good
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 07:29 PST
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i know i've already reviewed, this is a really good Yu Yu Hakusho fic. PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 12:51 PST
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Good Fic about Yusuke and Keiko. Can't wait to see what happens with Boton, Kurama, and Koenma. Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 16:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more!! i must have more!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: reddragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 12:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, i like how long the last chap was!!! Plzzz update
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Reviewed By: un named On: November 11, 2003 16:03 PST
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good plote devilment. I wonder where it will go. Oh have a threesome with Yusuke, Keiko, and Botan at school. that would be grate
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Title: DAMN!!!!!! *SPOILERS*
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 14:56 PST
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I did'nt have time to read the whole thing but the end was very HOT!!! But it was hella funny when those cops came in.
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