| "Yusuke's Birthday" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: ReikaiTantei0201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 02:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Great fic, please continue. You've done an EXCELLENT job so far, let's see how far you can take this. |
Reviewed By: Wierdo On: June 09, 2003 13:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do more parts but don't have them do that fantasy thing. (I think it's stupid) |
Reviewed By: Skydragon On: June 06, 2003 09:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this fic was great. I also think you shoyld right another chapter with yusuke and botan. |
Reviewed By: PrincessZelda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 18:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
oo, this is great. make as many parts as u want. youre on my favorites list |
Reviewed By: mel On: May 30, 2003 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought u gave enough detail 4 me 2 b there. that was the bestestest story i'se eva red(so far). u on my top 10 list! 4 sho! |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 13:10 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was hella funny!!!
And so very like Keiko, to spy on Yuusuke!!! (I hate that bitch!!! U shoulda made her die or sumthing after she fell!!!)
But what I don't understand is, how can she slap Yuusuke for *enjoying himself* with this laptop? She shouldn't have spied on him in the first place!!! He should've slapped her ass back!!!
And when Kuwabara was cussin Yuusuke out was hella funny, too!!!
Overall, I enjoyed it. And you might like my fic, Grrrl Talk (it's on this site). I'm putting this down as one of my favorites!!! |
Reviewed By: aown On: May 13, 2003 00:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good
you have to write more i can't wait to see
the ,,, well never mined that
u have to wirte more
PLZ |
Reviewed By: un named On: May 11, 2003 00:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
have Yusuke redem himslef in fornt of kikoy parnts and then have kikoy sumit to him |
Reviewed By: n/a On: May 06, 2003 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think you should continue the basic story but also add a story with Kuwabara and/or Botan |
Reviewed By: dark angel On: May 03, 2003 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think that yusuke and botan should get (Together). Let Botan pay a vist to Yusuke in her school uniform then let things get hot and heated between them. |
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