| "Yusuke's Birthday" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 15:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you finish the story I realy like reading the story.
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Reviewed By: hottie On: February 26, 2004 18:06 PST
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can u update faster this story is real good and u stop it a a raely good place so pease update
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Reviewed By: okasa-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 09:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The rape fantasy sequence was excellent, the way both Yusuke and Keiko kept in mind that it was a fantasy was very sweet. So when do we get the Botan, Koenma, and Kurama chapter?
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Reviewed By: KuramandHiei4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was very good
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 07:29 PST
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i know i've already reviewed, this is a really good Yu Yu Hakusho fic. PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 12:51 PST
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Good Fic about Yusuke and Keiko. Can't wait to see what happens with Boton, Kurama, and Koenma. Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 16:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more!! i must have more!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: reddragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 12:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, i like how long the last chap was!!! Plzzz update
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Reviewed By: un named On: November 11, 2003 16:03 PST
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good plote devilment. I wonder where it will go. Oh have a threesome with Yusuke, Keiko, and Botan at school. that would be grate
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Title: DAMN!!!!!! *SPOILERS*
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 14:56 PST
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I did'nt have time to read the whole thing but the end was very HOT!!! But it was hella funny when those cops came in.
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Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 13:46 PDT
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BTW this story has the best ironic twist to it.
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Title: You done it again
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 08:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your hentai stories always have exicting plots damn your good at this stuff.
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Reviewed By: ^_^ On: August 09, 2003 13:27 PDT
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hey dat waz realli good. mi god! mi panties r wet! heheheh gotta go change them! iz realli good ^_^ |
Reviewed By: yusukelover02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 18:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story! but i just hate that bitch keiko! ugh its so like her to spy on yusuke! ya think that you could add me in there? hehe to spice it up a bit? |
Reviewed By: A. Nonnie Mouse On: July 18, 2003 00:38 PDT
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0_0 Wow~! That was awesome! ^_^ I agree, that one scene where Atsuko was goading Botan and she didn't put up any argument, and then later at the hospital just sort of melted away... pretty interesting fuel for a YusukexBotan scene. ^_~ But Yusuke loves Keiko, and this was great! |
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