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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 22:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter wasn't lame. It was a needed transition chapter. You had to do it, and it was well done. Putting confusions and doubt into Bulma's mind about Vegeta's intentions. Woooooooo. Please hurry with the next update!!!
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Title: The Prince's Plan"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 19:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i just read this story man you where right when you said that you were tried of the mushy stuff between v/b.this story is whack and i mean that in a NIce WHY...HE IT A BASTARD but i do feel sorry for yamcha a little. i just want to read if bulma would ever find out what vegeta did.or are you just going to end it like that???? great story vey different and i like that...maria
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 15:35 EST
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THANk the heavenly lord u updated I loved this chappy it was not stupid Yamcha I hate that ass lol. well Update soon I cant wait to see how drastic the chapy will be >:) LOL LATER
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Reviewed By: RejectedMinxy On: October 13, 2004 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo! vegeta's a bad bad lil boy! hahaha! so devious, michievous, and...well...overall bad! hahaha! good! very good!
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 12:47 EDT
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Ok! hmmm update!!! please!! I really want to know where this goes. **grovels** I love your V BTW, he is a bastard and you keep him that way. Keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
manipulating sexy arogant sexy devil in disgise. he may have wanted bulma since he saw her on namek but i wanted him since i saw him on a log next to nappa. mmmmmm he looked like...... well i dont know anything that makes sence so in the words of 50 cent, i love him like a fat kid loves cake.
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 22, 2004 06:21 EST
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plz plz plz update this soon as well as your great fic slave!!!!!!! they both rock so dont leave this 1 out!!!!!! bye byez and surfs up!
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 09, 2004 10:12 EST
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plz plz plz update soon!!!! this fic rocks!!!!! SURFS UP!!!
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 02, 2004 10:06 EST
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pz pz update soon!!!! ur fic slave as well these both rock!!! update em both soon plz! SURFS UP
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very witty and humorus piece. I'm waitng for the next update now, so please hurry!
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Reviewed By: bimbo amd dittz On: November 03, 2003 07:53 EST
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update soon plz this rock!!!!s gtg teacha now cumin!!!! bye byez! look 4wd 2 nxt chappie!
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Reviewed By: bimbo_ditz On: October 13, 2003 07:37 EDT
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plzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!! gtg coz we in a bizness lesson luvin the fic so far, bye byez! and plz if any time EVERY1 check out any of our fics our pen name is just bimbo and ditz remeber to leave a review 2!!! lol, nobody seems ta like us no mores.... sobs..... oh well keep up the g8 work!!!!! and update soon!!!! luv bimbo and ditz
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Reviewed By: bimbo_ditz On: October 06, 2003 07:34 EDT
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plozzzzzz update soon!!!! this rocks!!!!! so much!!!!! geta is 100 00000 times betta than yamcha any day!
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 16:02 EDT
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Oh wow! Vegeta is an asshole. Too bad he couldn't say all those romantic things while meaning it. But I guess the fact that he wants her is something. But damn! Did he have to beat up Yamcha like that. That was cruel. And he's so manipulative. It wouldn't be so bad if Bulma didn't appear so gullable and easy. Don't get me wrong now, I do like your fic. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, so good. Vegeta is quite the devious bastard isn't he? I like that. I don't know why Bulma would want to go back to Yamucha. It's VEGETA!!! VEGETA!!!!! I hope you can find the time to write more. ^_^ I love how this story is developing and how Vegeta is manipulating Bulma and playing with her emotions deviously.
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