| "The Prince's Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 14, 2003 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn if your not going to update slave then at least update this im going nut well um thats about it bye |
Reviewed By: blackdeath On: June 06, 2003 21:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
please udate!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must agree with Lone Vixen on this one. The playing chess thing was funny, but while I doubt Vegeta would have many qualms about beating the ever-loving crud out of a rival, I think his pride would make him act more openly.
This guy is a psychotic. Vegeta is more of a violent narcissist. |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: May 20, 2003 20:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
With the way this is going, i almost don't want to see Bulma and Vegeta get together. He doesn't deserve her if he is being so manipulative. In this story, he is incredably OOC; especially when he dresses up like some lowly criminal and uses a bat to beat up Yamcha. With all that power, the real Vegeta wouldn't have bothered with a weapon. *shakes her head* he has no brain it seems in this fic. it's like he can't get the girl by being himself. Instead he resolves to using tricks. Tis sad...
From one writer to another, i wish you luck with the rest of your story...despite any of my negative opinions. |
Reviewed By: Yoyo! On: May 19, 2003 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really, and I mean really, liked it. Pwease write more *gives author puppy dog eyes*Pwease??? |
Reviewed By: Saya Mishima On: May 19, 2003 17:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
great story :) I love how you made Vegeta so sneaky hehehe.... Please continue! |
Reviewed By: kris On: May 19, 2003 13:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
Nice Yamcha bashing!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 22:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS!!! VEGETA GOD HE CAN MANIPULATE ME ANY DAY OF THE WEEK AND IN ANY WAY HE WANTS YUMMMM! RRARRR!
THANK U FOR THE YAMCHA BASHING!!! LOL I HAD SO MUCH FUNNN HA!! THE PUSSY WITH BRAIN DAMAGE THANNNNNNKKKK UUUU!!
I WANT LEMONNNNNN!!
UPDATE SOONNNN
LATER! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hah! I have to see vegeta beat that fag into a bloody pulp! Its going to be ssssswwweeeett! Lol
Great job so far^_^
Hope you continue. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 17:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh dear. This Vegeta seems noticably dumber than his other portrayals. I can just see the chaos rising.
Poor little saiyen: muscles so big; brain so small... |
Reviewed By: kris On: May 14, 2003 14:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue! I want to see what Vegeta does to Yamcha. You always come up with something good! |
Reviewed By: Sera and SSJ_DarkStar713 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 23:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
Continue! *wants to see Vegeta beat Yamcha to a bloody pulp* Hehe... It would also be cool to see just WHAT Saiyan Courting Rituals are... |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2003 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story I dont care if its old or not.I want vegeta to beat Yamcha's ass into the next dimension ! HAHHAHHAHAHA a bat and ski mask Vegeta very funny! Please continue ! UPDATE SOONNNNN! I WANT MY LEMONADEEEEE!!!!!
LOL LATER! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 18:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hehehe, Vegeta is being a naughty boy, I should be the one to punish him!! I love the way you've made Vegeta's personality, he's so sweet, yet so evil and manipulative. I love how Bulma is totally thrown off. MORE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ hehehe, we love our Veggie-chan. |
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