| "The Prince's Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: inny On: July 15, 2003 19:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! this is a very cool fic!! please update soon...I really like this vegeta...mostly hard, but with a soft side...
thank you for writing it and gave me a nice thing to read....
good luck with the next chapter! (F) |
Reviewed By: Akasha On: July 14, 2003 02:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is certaintly an original fanfiction and I hope that, unlike mine, your muse never deserts you. (Meaning- Please write more!) You are a talented writer. |
Reviewed By: Kaioh On: July 04, 2003 03:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeheheheh
that was the BEST LEMON ever, well not ever, but I read the first 2 chapters, and I liked it, but I was starting to doubt it. Thinking, Vageta sounds kind of like a dumb ass, what makes him think he is going to get Bulma when her b/f is in the Hospital. HAHAHA
but you turned it around (good good)
I have an idea, if you don't have any! If you are getting writers block. However you probably have many, but you never know.. I want to tell you, but IN E-MAIL, so if you are interested e-mail is miyu_kaioh@hotmail.com
I like the way you got Vegeta to sneak in to her pants, it was Very good, realistic, like he is one of them “bad” man and she is just a clueless child. Pluse most crazy people are genius, ^_~ I like what is going on in your head. Ha ha |
Reviewed By: kris On: July 03, 2003 14:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this Vegeta. A bit of a manipulative bastard, but I like him. Can't wait to see what happens! |
Reviewed By: bimbo and ditz On: June 27, 2003 07:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!! this fic is great! we luvd the yamcha bashing bit!!! he he! bulma so needs vegeta not him!!!! update soon please!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DarkPrincess On: June 27, 2003 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwhahahahaha! oh my god! i love this story! its so evil and yeah thats kinda what it is...evil! i like, i like alot! |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 17:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
I wasn't expecting such a bitter responce and i'm sorry that the responce i had made before offended you so. Obviously yes, i DID miss the author's note. I usually look over them when i'm dieing to just read the fic. It wasn't lack of an open-mind, it was only a thought i had about the fic so i put it in the review WITHOUT intension of offending through critisism. So there was no need to to try and lower me down by making my intelligence seem inferior or that i have no level of understanding, because i do. I'm sure there have been times you've over-looked a small detail such as an author's note.
I still wish you luck as i do with anyone.
-Lone Vixen |
Reviewed By: Ðäñtè [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 15:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAMZING MORE MORE MORE ME LOVED THE ENTIRE THING MORE SOONPLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat sneaky bastard Vegeta!!
What a asshole!! HOLY COW I LOVE HIM ^^
Heh.
CONTINUE SOON!!
This was a great chapter.....
Vegeta was acting sooo fake and mushy (not a bad comment, it's a good one, cause that's what Vegeta was suppose to act like ^^)....I could just see the grin on his face when he looks away :P |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Lady On: June 25, 2003 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...
Hmm...
cool :) |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: June 25, 2003 11:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh, Veggie played Bulma like a drum, he is the master |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: June 25, 2003 11:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yes, it´s different and I´m enjoying!
Please, more chapters!
[ ]´s, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Ave On: June 25, 2003 10:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yaaaaay! I love your B/V fics, always have always will... sorry I haven't reviewed anything in so long, things around here took a nose dive. Anyways, great chappie! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Bimbo and Ditz On: June 25, 2003 09:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
we like the fic! keep up the g8 work! and if u like B?V fics u should ck out our 1z they r under our pen name 'bimbo and ditz'
p.s this fic rocks! upd8 soon please!!! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: June 24, 2003 02:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ UPDATE!!!!!!...OH YA , I WANT MY LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(you best update VERY soon or I'll have find you and kill you very slowly!!!!) PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! |
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