| "The Prince's Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaiOJO On: April 18, 2013 13:03 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love all your fics and this one is a standout! Love the characters! The vegeta was the closest in character I've read! I know as romantics we love the change the bad boy fics but this one has reminded me of how much of a bastard he actually is in canon! Well done! |
Reviewed By: anonymous1 On: January 30, 2011 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequel please! Sequel please! I loved this! |
Reviewed By: lois On: September 20, 2007 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i like the end. i would liked a longer story but vegeta was so mean. that was enough. :)
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 18:55 EST
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i like and like...
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Now that was a plan. That was the Vegeta I've envisioned. Though I don't object to a little lightening up as it progress. I do enjoy a dark fic every so often. nice work
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Title: I LOVED IT
Reviewed By: LUISA On: June 29, 2005 17:17 EDT
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maybeyou should make it like that slowy he falls in love with her without even realizing it and he feeles guilty of all the hurt he caused her but she iis super mad still of couse and does not care and leaves his side he lets her go decing to give her time after all he did do so many bad things to her but then she has always loved vegeta but now she realizes it and goes back to him and they have a killer lemon well just a small idea even if its not so small :) well please take this idea for a sequel your very determined i know but please ps.you could change anything you want so take it to your advantige ok so ill be leaving you now byeeeeeeee
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Title: fairy tale ending
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an awesome ending! I think it was an interesting take on Vegeta and wonder why your the only one smart enough to realize it.
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Title: BWAHAHAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10+++++++++++++++++++ OMG THAT WAS F*CKING EVIL BEYOND ANYTHING I HAVE EVER READ! THAT PART WHERE VEGETA FOUND OUT THAT BULMA WAS PREGNANT AND HIS FIRST INCLINATION WAS TO LAUGH--AAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!!!!!!! OMG, that is just TOO much! I so wanted to die, it is so freaking evil that I have the most biggest evil smile on my face too! LOL, if only more people wrote like that--it is so awesome how you didn't let Vegeta change...he totally stayed the evil, manical person he has always been, manipulating people to get what he wants. Oh, and he got what he want. Damn, you are a genius! 10++++++++++!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bvgirl On: January 30, 2005 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story but the ending leaves you at a stand still. I want more. What happens next. Come on tell us. PLEASE!!! Keep going its soo good. Your a great writer. I Love the story and making it longer will only improve it. PLEASE conyinue the story.
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Reviewed By: nsb On: January 30, 2005 14:00 EST
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HOLY SHIT@!!!!!! THIS IS NSBVEGETA FALLING TO HER KNEES IM NOT WORTHY!! GENIUS INCREADIBLY DARK I LOVED IT OH I LOVE WHEN GETA IS BAD~VERY VERY BAD SAIYAN OHHHH!! *purrs* LOL GREAT LEMON MY DEAR DAMN THAT WOMAN LOL KEEP UP THE FIC COMMING YAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
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Reviewed By: JEanna On: January 30, 2005 13:58 EST
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Reviewed By: Mely On: January 29, 2005 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the ending!!!! Great job with this story. You should continue the story showing how their relationship is now that Bulma is forced to stay with Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: DVD Maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy living fuck...I love this fic. Ilove you.
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Title: The Prince's Plan
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 08:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you where right that was very dark and i love the ending.thats the way it should have been. for the truth to come out and for her to know what he's capable to do..i'll mis this story so please write more...great job...maria
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Reviewed By: kitty41rox On: January 19, 2005 19:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, its an awesome story, plz hurry up and review, ure a great writer
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