| "The Prince's Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Title: fairy tale ending
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an awesome ending! I think it was an interesting take on Vegeta and wonder why your the only one smart enough to realize it.
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Title: BWAHAHAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10+++++++++++++++++++ OMG THAT WAS F*CKING EVIL BEYOND ANYTHING I HAVE EVER READ! THAT PART WHERE VEGETA FOUND OUT THAT BULMA WAS PREGNANT AND HIS FIRST INCLINATION WAS TO LAUGH--AAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!!!!!!! OMG, that is just TOO much! I so wanted to die, it is so freaking evil that I have the most biggest evil smile on my face too! LOL, if only more people wrote like that--it is so awesome how you didn't let Vegeta change...he totally stayed the evil, manical person he has always been, manipulating people to get what he wants. Oh, and he got what he want. Damn, you are a genius! 10++++++++++!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bvgirl On: January 30, 2005 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story but the ending leaves you at a stand still. I want more. What happens next. Come on tell us. PLEASE!!! Keep going its soo good. Your a great writer. I Love the story and making it longer will only improve it. PLEASE conyinue the story.
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Reviewed By: nsb On: January 30, 2005 14:00 EST
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HOLY SHIT@!!!!!! THIS IS NSBVEGETA FALLING TO HER KNEES IM NOT WORTHY!! GENIUS INCREADIBLY DARK I LOVED IT OH I LOVE WHEN GETA IS BAD~VERY VERY BAD SAIYAN OHHHH!! *purrs* LOL GREAT LEMON MY DEAR DAMN THAT WOMAN LOL KEEP UP THE FIC COMMING YAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
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Reviewed By: JEanna On: January 30, 2005 13:58 EST
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Reviewed By: Mely On: January 29, 2005 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the ending!!!! Great job with this story. You should continue the story showing how their relationship is now that Bulma is forced to stay with Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: DVD Maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy living fuck...I love this fic. Ilove you.
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Title: The Prince's Plan
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 08:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you where right that was very dark and i love the ending.thats the way it should have been. for the truth to come out and for her to know what he's capable to do..i'll mis this story so please write more...great job...maria
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Reviewed By: kitty41rox On: January 19, 2005 19:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, its an awesome story, plz hurry up and review, ure a great writer
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 22:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter wasn't lame. It was a needed transition chapter. You had to do it, and it was well done. Putting confusions and doubt into Bulma's mind about Vegeta's intentions. Woooooooo. Please hurry with the next update!!!
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Title: The Prince's Plan"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 19:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i just read this story man you where right when you said that you were tried of the mushy stuff between v/b.this story is whack and i mean that in a NIce WHY...HE IT A BASTARD but i do feel sorry for yamcha a little. i just want to read if bulma would ever find out what vegeta did.or are you just going to end it like that???? great story vey different and i like that...maria
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 15:35 EST
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THANk the heavenly lord u updated I loved this chappy it was not stupid Yamcha I hate that ass lol. well Update soon I cant wait to see how drastic the chapy will be >:) LOL LATER
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Reviewed By: RejectedMinxy On: October 13, 2004 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo! vegeta's a bad bad lil boy! hahaha! so devious, michievous, and...well...overall bad! hahaha! good! very good!
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 12:47 EDT
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Ok! hmmm update!!! please!! I really want to know where this goes. **grovels** I love your V BTW, he is a bastard and you keep him that way. Keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
manipulating sexy arogant sexy devil in disgise. he may have wanted bulma since he saw her on namek but i wanted him since i saw him on a log next to nappa. mmmmmm he looked like...... well i dont know anything that makes sence so in the words of 50 cent, i love him like a fat kid loves cake.
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