| "Untold Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey finally you updated! great i loved the chapter and inuyasha being a concerned father is so cute! keep it up !!!!! CHEERS!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 00:19 CDT
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I am glad you are back. I have missed this story. Great chapter. Naraku is so evil. Did Naraku by any chance rape Kagome at any time? I think I kinda feel sorry for what is going to happen to Naraku once they get their hands on him. I think I would fear Kagome more so. Cause if there is one thing all males should know, it is to NOT get between them or harm their babies. Don't matter if the kid is a baby or a grown up. Momas defend their kids to the death, whether that be their own or the perp it don't matter. They are like wolverines. Once attacked, they never give up. Keep up the excellente work. I absolutely love this story.
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf On: July 07, 2004 10:36 CDT
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Hi this story is awesome i love it im so glad you updated or i wouldve never gotten to read this story Inuyasha is so cute but i feel bad for him he has gone through so much i hope there is a happy ending and naraku dies a slow very painful death stupid fake hanyou please update soon
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Reviewed By: Katami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 17:38 CDT
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Just wondering if you knew: The Japanese word for "noisy" is "urusai". But, Japan has a much more polite society, and, in Japanese, calling someone noisy has a stronger meaning and is therefore translated as shut up. Is this what you mean when you write "urasi"? Also, the noodles that Inuyasha is so fond of are called "ramen", not "raman". Just wanted to let you know...
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Reviewed By: kawaiimiko (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 02:28 CDT
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WoW! This is nifty! I love it! I just started reading it today, and finished what you have posted so far. I really hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 01:40 CDT
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I'm glad you finally updated and decided to finish the story. But for your future work could you please put the definitions of the Japanese word your use in your story? Sorry but I don't speak the language and therefor don't understand every random Japanese word.
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Title: keep up the good work!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work ! although i'm saddend by the part bout it almost coming to an end and mabey it's not a good thing but that all ur idea! keep up the good work and i can't wate till u update next! ^_^
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Title: untold secrets
Reviewed By: goth_inu_girl On: June 23, 2004 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u last updated in february! y haven't u updated since? i hope u get over u're writers block so u can finish the story. they better get the pups back or u'll have a lot of angry reveiwers! me included! plz finish the story soon! *_~ c ya
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope uget over ur writers block soon and keep writing this is oe of the best fics out there i think!!! ^__^ keep up the good work!!! 0_o that Naraku bsterd i hope he gets whats commin to him!!! and InuYasha and Kagome get there pups back!! ;_; that part almost made me cry!
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Reviewed By: Najiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made it interesting and suspenseful, while still keeping everyone in character. I really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: lil_angel (not login) On: May 19, 2004 14:28 CDT
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oh my gosh!!! I've only finish reading chapter nine and I was crying my eyes out. It was so sad and it was getting worse by the minute. Just hope things work out for the better for inu/kag. Keep updating. It's an interesting story!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sesskitten6 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your story and I cant wait to see what will happen next!! Oh yeah, how much will it cost you to get all that Inu stuff?? (I'm just a little bit curious)
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Reviewed By: sesskitten6 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 12:42 CDT
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I Love your story and I cant wait to see what will happen next!! Oh yeah, how much will it cost you to get all that Inu stuff?? (I'm just a little bit curious)
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: kornychic33 On: April 08, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story and im reading it for the second time! please put in another chapter as soon as you can i am dying without it! anyway i think i found a goof :O no offence :) but when inuyasha and kagome exchange real 'i love u's, it says the moon reflects in her eyes, and that the moon is about to set... but isnt there no moon when inuyasha is human? or am i wrong... just a question! keep up the AMAZING writing! big fan :)
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Title: la la la
Reviewed By: hellidontknow On: April 02, 2004 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow oh wow oh wow! I just stayed up till 5:07 am reading all this it was soooo good! Damn birds, stop singing! tehehe. Take all the "10" ratings and multiply them by like, 238385748398432341485711203948759349284439853202398475349857. Is that number big enough? *thinks* Me no know. Any who... write write write!! =D
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