"Untold Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Serena63083 On: June 30, 2003 13:34 CDT Comment/Review: great chapter very evil cliffhanger. write soon!!! |
Reviewed By: alexis On: June 29, 2003 05:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story so much! The only reason I check FF.net or mediaminer, is to see if this story has a new chapter. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what Inu's reaction will be to Kag's pregnancy! |
Reviewed By: Jvirgo90 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 01:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Damn Charlie! That was great! It was notboring and it wasnt to porn like...you know? It wasntlike a ridiculous, disgusting, 69 act or some shit. It waspassionate and even though Inu was very...umm...ACTIVE... Kagome still hada night of lovemaking not just anight of lust and sex! KEEPUP THE WORK...CHARLIE!!! |
Reviewed By: Ricardo On: June 25, 2003 15:51 CDT Comment/Review: its pretty confusing, why wouldn't kagome want inuyasha (the young one) to be around her while she was with the dying inuyasha? |
Reviewed By: KaGoMiAkA On: June 24, 2003 15:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love your story. Though sometimes I'd get lost in the time periods and flashbacks, you eventually made it clear.
I felt an extreme need to review your fic and encourage you to keep up the great work. I've never seen a story quite like this, and you write Takahashi's characters so well.
You also have a extrodinary way off explaining the character's feelings so well.
Thank you for such an incredible story and please update the next post ASAP!
~*(KaGoMiAkA)*~ |
Reviewed By: KinkyKagome On: June 24, 2003 12:14 CDT Comment/Review: That was soo sad that I cried. But it was a good sad please continue. |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: June 21, 2003 16:09 CDT Comment/Review: Ah, lovely story. I like the two Inuyashas idea, never read one before. I was wondering what effects changing the past was going to have. Since we were changing things, we might as well have tried to avoid the whole thing, huh? Oh well. |
Reviewed By: birdcage On: June 12, 2003 20:36 CDT Comment/Review: i love stories that involve the older inuyasha.. please continue! |
Reviewed By: Soranji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 12:00 CDT Comment/Review: do have to say how much i love your story. it soooooooooo good. i was crying after chapter 7 por future inuyasha. and does this mean kagome's having a baby? hmm can;t wait to see what happens |
Reviewed By: Kethry On: June 05, 2003 08:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoyed this fic so far, a nice twist to it already and am looking forward to your next chapter. You did a great job catching my attention with this story (believe me I'm picky lol). Keep up the good work and best wishes. |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 22:27 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: so what happens when inu(past) discovers that kagome has been sleeping with his future self and is his mate? wouldn't that make her past inu's mate too?
see this is what happens when you time travel, the continum gets all messed up.
btw, lovely lemon. update soon! |
Reviewed By: Paws On: May 16, 2003 18:02 CDT Comment/Review: *raised eyebrows* Ok, now this is a different twist to all this! *Big Grin* Two InuYasha's hmmm what an image! Kagome's going to have her hands very full! *laughs* Hope you can update again soon. |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 23:01 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Not bad. Not Bad At All. |
Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 17:40 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: it's Confussing. Please write more so we know what is going on! |
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 20:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT AT THAT! ~_~ You're mean! lol You better update soon, or I will make you read my bad Inu fic! MWHAHAHAHAA! .... Or I could send Naraku over to you! ^_^* That sounds better. O well, please update! If u don't, INu will be locked in my closet with Naraku! Hahahaha ^_^; |
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