| "Untold Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maggie On: July 29, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,
I just wanted to comment on the whole using Japanese words in the middle of a English written fanfic. I honestly do speak broken Japanese most of the time and so do most of my friends, and I find nothing wrong with using it in fanfics. I support you fully in using sentences such as "That is so kawaii!" instead of "That is so cute!"; and your right, most of the other authors do write the same way (using Japanese words in the middle of an English sentence). I think that as long as the majority of the people think it's okay to write the way you are then it's fine, and considering most authors do it shouldn't be a problem. Well I just wanted to give my thoughts on that comment and say that I really enjoy reading your work! Please keep it up!
Sincerely,
Maggie |
Reviewed By: Lady NightWolf On: July 27, 2003 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. I hope others had as much fun reading this like i did.
Thank You
Lady NightWolf
(a.k.a. nicole) |
Reviewed By: caliko On: July 25, 2003 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, look.. about 'hai' 'gomen nasai' 'iie', ect. don't worry about it. Regardless of what ANYoNE says, it is a part of fanfiction heritage (at least in regard of anime fanfiction) It's even got a name - fanfictionese.
Now, I personally stopped using fanfictionese because i wrote for an english audience and it seemed to me that my stories flowed better without it. BUT.. it's personal preference. Sometimes, too many unfamiliar phrases get irritating, rather than add authentic flaver. Sometimes, it works fine. Write what YOU like better...
~Caliko |
Reviewed By: caliko On: July 25, 2003 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, look.. about 'hai' 'gomen nasai' 'iie', ect. don't worry about it. Regardless of what ANYoNE says, it is a part of fanfiction heritage (at least in regard of anime fanfiction) It's even got a name - fanfictionese.
Now, I personally stopped using fanfictionese because i wrote for an english audience and it seemed to me that my stories flowed better without it. BUT.. it's personal preference. Sometimes, too many unfamiliar phrases get irritating, rather than add authentic flaver. Sometimes, it works fine. Write what YOU like better...
~Caliko |
Reviewed By: Writer of Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I will not stomp my foot etc because i like teasers and i understand that there are things in life that people must or want to do. Anyway this is a great fic and i wish for a happy ending! |
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you.. you.. you.. OMG YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE! ***pouting and stamping my foot** Ouch.. stubbed toe.. and it's ALL YOUR FAULT! Hmph! But.. if you post the next chapter quickly.. i'll forgive your for hurting my foot.
~Caliko |
Reviewed By: Angel of the night On: July 11, 2003 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writting is great! i have never seen some one using the two Inuyasha, i always wonder why no one did it and i see now why. It is really hard to use it, there are to many question as to what changing the past is doig to the present and if the two times collide what would happen to the two times.I have a question about all this wouldn't the memories of those in the future and the existence of Inuyasha change sense they know what happened in the future? |
Reviewed By: NekoYasha On: July 09, 2003 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The beginning of the story was very cool & very original, lots of nice twists & turns. But I cried my eyes out when Inu dies, that is too cruel!!(sobs uncontrollably) I love how the story's going, update soon!! Cliffhangers are bad for my heart ^^ keep writin please |
Reviewed By: Bleryn On: July 08, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first of its kind...at least out of what I've ever read. And ya cut it out just at the good part! I want more! give. me. MORE! Yeah. |
Reviewed By: kethry On: July 08, 2003 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, keep up the good work, can't wait to read what happens next. lol I check almost every day to see if you update, thank you for writing such an interesting fanfic, I wish all fanfics were as well done. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story, but it was so sad as well as itresting. I can't wait to read the next one. |
Reviewed By: classic cowboy On: July 07, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh dear, that ending has me very very worried, what ya cookin angel? keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: The1DK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fanfic. I have never read one that moved me as much as this one did. Your style of writing and spelling and grammar were excellent. This is definately one of the most original pieces of work I have ever read. I truly enjoyed this story and am waiting for the next chapter in the series. |
Reviewed By: Wingson [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!
I love this fic! I guessed most of the stuff, but it still confused me for a second.
Now, on to the important part. Given how this fic is going, I don't think Kagome will or should accept Inuyasha's proposal right away. It is too soon for both of them. But I want to see them together!!!!! So don't disapoint me there! Onegai!!
WS |
Reviewed By: princess-of-anime-kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 04:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
ITs awesome! Ooohmygosh! u totally have to post the next chapter as soon as u can! Chapter 7 made me cry so hard, im still crying ;-; |
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