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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 09:19 CDT
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plz update this or do something with it soon. i know that it says that it's completed & u haven't written anything for it in a few years, but it just doesn't seem like it should end there. i absolutly love it so far & hope that you decide to add to it soon.
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Title: very inspiring!!!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi there i love...no admire... no die for ur story.. i can feel every emotion they gp through and i actually cried (in the library) as i read the part about kagome crying for inuyasha because when he hurts she does too. its so touching and i would give u a grammy if i were one of those people who nominate. i love how u put such devotion and love into each character... i can feel it through the story and its heart warming to know that inu was afraid to lose kag.. please dont stop writing ur story . i need to know what else happens. so please update soon. such a wonderful and heart filled story this is.. u should be proud that it is so well written. thankx . babydragon 213
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is so intense. I love it when someone writes their characters thoughtfully like this rather than just the everyday, immature grumbling. It really adds a whole new depth to everyone. I have to admit though I can't figure out which one of them I think it being more of an ass right now. Why can't they ever just get things out in the open instead of pining away stupidly and making conflict where there is none? Ah, love can be so ridiculous. The ending of that last chapter, was very...ooc for Inuyasha. I can't believe he would ever think she would leave him...but then again...if the pain was too much for her. I imagine though that Kagome's character would rather die than leave his side. Ok well my rambling aside I think you're doing a beautiful job with this fic. You're obviously a very good writer and are doing a great job with the internal battles of each of the characters. Keep up the fantastic work. I look forward to your next update ;)
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Reviewed By: Kagamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 12:02 CDT
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I was so devastated when I found that the story didn't end on chapter four! Now I have to cry. Can you pretty please update soon, I love this story, it's great! It's so awesome! Looking forward to the update ^-^!!
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Reviewed By: Literary Critic On: May 29, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good so far! I adore it. Your writing flows from one sentence to the next, making it easy to follow. I like that about it. Although this plot has been maybe once or twice before, you have made it your own. Good job and update whenever.
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Title: Oh, wow!
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow! I love this one! ^_^; I really really love this one!
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Reviewed By: gaelicvixen On: April 05, 2005 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a sucker for angst. -_- I send my hearty thanks to your writer's block for this little diversion. I'm reminded of my own teenage years -- damn you! -- and God how very angsty and confusing they were...and how artfully you've captured that turmoil in Inuyasha and Kagome (who we all know are full to bursting with angst).
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Reviewed By: IdiotGirl020 On: April 05, 2005 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey awesome story, it'd be awesome if you could update soon! Well I'll be looking out for more chapters from you!
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Jurei-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful work on this, Cat-san!^^ I've always liked this story...this is my fifth time reading over what you have, and I'm still absolutely ecstatic about the writing. Maybe because it's been a while before I've read an Inuyasha fic where the author isn't so preoccupied with the so-called 'real' portrayal of the characters that they forget the actual EMOTION that prompts their actions...^^; Anyways, I know this is just to remedy writer's block, but I really can't want to see more from this story...keep up the marvellous work! ~Jurei^6
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Reviewed By: Tailsarehot_05 On: January 15, 2005 00:11 CST
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Why!!! Why did u have to stop right there! Please finish!??? please?
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Reviewed By: Krazy_Kilala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 22:47 CST
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She's pregnant, isn't she?!
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Reviewed By: sisana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good. Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: The Lion Queen On: November 30, 2004 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a great fan of yours and am very fond of your work. This piece here is among my most favorite Inu Yasha fanfics. :) I know that you use this piece merely to overcome writer's block, but I thought I could point out one inconsistancy. In this chapter you have Inu Yasha claiming Kagome as his mate, but in the 2nd & 3rd chapters I was left with the impression that Inu Yasha would *not* claim her as his mate, because he could not offer her anything. But then again, I'm just a reader. Just thought I'd point that out. Anyhoo, keep up the writing. I'll always be waiting patiently. :)
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Title: ...Words Fail
Reviewed By: Djablesse On: November 28, 2004 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was gorgeosly brilliantly beautiful. I just wish it had lasted longer.
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