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Reviewed By: Jurei-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful work on this, Cat-san!^^ I've always liked this story...this is my fifth time reading over what you have, and I'm still absolutely ecstatic about the writing. Maybe because it's been a while before I've read an Inuyasha fic where the author isn't so preoccupied with the so-called 'real' portrayal of the characters that they forget the actual EMOTION that prompts their actions...^^; Anyways, I know this is just to remedy writer's block, but I really can't want to see more from this story...keep up the marvellous work! ~Jurei^6
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Reviewed By: Tailsarehot_05 On: January 15, 2005 00:11 CST
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Why!!! Why did u have to stop right there! Please finish!??? please?
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Reviewed By: Krazy_Kilala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 22:47 CST
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She's pregnant, isn't she?!
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Reviewed By: sisana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good. Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: The Lion Queen On: November 30, 2004 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a great fan of yours and am very fond of your work. This piece here is among my most favorite Inu Yasha fanfics. :) I know that you use this piece merely to overcome writer's block, but I thought I could point out one inconsistancy. In this chapter you have Inu Yasha claiming Kagome as his mate, but in the 2nd & 3rd chapters I was left with the impression that Inu Yasha would *not* claim her as his mate, because he could not offer her anything. But then again, I'm just a reader. Just thought I'd point that out. Anyhoo, keep up the writing. I'll always be waiting patiently. :)
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Title: ...Words Fail
Reviewed By: Djablesse On: November 28, 2004 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was gorgeosly brilliantly beautiful. I just wish it had lasted longer.
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 16:04 CST
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Please update!!!!! This story is realllly good!
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Reviewed By: Little Big Mac Billy Joe Bob ( Billy for short ) On: November 23, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such an awesome author! I love your stories! I really liked Wait for Me. That was good. And The MEasure of a Hanyou. ^^ You're fantastic! I can't wait for an update to this story!
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Reviewed By: MysticAngeldust^^ On: November 18, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, and I hope to see more of it sometime in the future. As long as I get to see what happens in the end I'm content to wait until you are done ^^. As for grammar and such I really don't think you need a beta for this. You write so well on your own, but of course I understand that we all miss things and it is always good to have someone there to let you know.
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Reviewed By: Eiko Kobayashi On: October 18, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing, I was reading this on ff.net too, and I love it. It just portrays both of them so well, Kagome's forgiving nature, and Inuyasha's thoughts. I love it. Please do update this soon, I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Eiko Kobayashi On: October 18, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing, I was reading this on ff.net too, and I love it. It just portrays both of them so well, Kagome's forgiving nature, and Inuyasha's thoughts. I love it. Please do update this soon, I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: kennascantloginforsomereason On: October 18, 2004 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I cant log in to this account for reviews no matter what I do. funny, I can update my story, but cant leave a signed review. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I love this story. I too am sick of the same story where they hook up and she gets pregnant and they have little Inuyasha's and everything is fine. I dont think they are supposed to have a happily ever after. As great as that would be, I think they are going to have to suffer some major trauma first. Thanks for taking this seed and planting it. As long as you DO update, I wont complain about the time in between. I DO wish that the chapters were longer, but thats because I love this story so much. I have one as well that I write on when I have writers block. Actually, you gave me the idea to do that. Thanks! Fortunately, I havent had to write on mine in a while.Keep it up and I'm looking forward to the next time you have writers block! *haha*
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: Aewi zu Haus On: October 18, 2004 08:30 CDT
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I like this story a lot. But could you please do me a favor? If you have not updated for a long time, can you summarize the last chapter? I can't remember what happened before. Thank you! And I look foward to reading this wonderful fic.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 18, 2004 05:42 CDT
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awww so sad =(
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Reviewed By: Thorninyourside On: October 18, 2004 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated! i'm sooo immensely happy!! i love you story, you have a wonderful way of protraying the characters emotions. please update again soon.
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