| "Borderline" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hatsuharu On: November 03, 2003 17:34 CST
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I'm....so.....amazed!! This is really great! *drools* please, you have to continue! or else... I'll commit suicide!^.~ you don't wanna have that bothering you, right? hehe^^ WRITE MORE!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: burito On: November 03, 2003 16:26 CST
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WOOOHOOOOO THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU hehe i happy u updated(cant u notice)
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: November 03, 2003 12:30 CST
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Happy day! I was waiting and praying that you hadn't dropped this fic. Wow, you have made my day. Simple mind, simple pleasure I suppose. But still, this is a well written and highly creative fic. I love it! ^_^ Happy continuation-ness ^__^
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 10:12 CST
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Ohhh WOW, this was sooo...LOVELY! Thank you for this update...soooo so much ^_^!!!!!! Oh, poor Ran...Crawford slapped him O_O..but the scene with Braddy and Rannie in the bed was just too SWEET ^_^! *Sigh*...oh, my review was the liveliest *giggle* *hehe* thanx ^_^...this one is a little bit calmer ^_~. Ja *keep going it's GREAT* Koji-chan
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>_
Reviewed By: RICKA KIBA On: September 20, 2003 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN NOT BRING THIS FIC DOWN .IT IS WAY TO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Title: ;_;
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 06:53 CDT
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the poor baby *heulkrampf*sobs* I'm probably gonna have nightmares from this, but oh well.. I enjoyed reading the story a lot... Ran's soooo cute *_* please update soon! |
Reviewed By: witchious one On: September 15, 2003 16:23 CDT
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GRRR and u just left it there!?hehe oh wow this is really cool |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 15:55 CDT
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Aaaaaaahhhhhh Fata (sorry^^)...das war geil geil geil geil geil geil sooooooo GEIL..ehh GREAT ^_^!!!! OMG...this scene in the kitchen...soooo CUTE, REALLY...OMG!!! And now you end HERE...at THIS moment O_o...I WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN...PLEASE oh PLEASE...SOON ^^;;!!!!
Ja *cantwaitcantwaitcantwaitcantwaitcantwait*^^
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 11:35 CDT
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Gaaaah!!!! I can't believe you left it there!! You are so cruel!!! But it was a lovely chapter. Feel bad for Ken but ah well, Ran needs Brad more. What can you do? Love this AU and how you have the boys in these roles. I'm so addicted to this story. I hope the next chappie won't be long in waiting! |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 06:35 CDT
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Pandora: Ohhhhh... poor Ran. *sniffles* And poor KenKen 'cause somehow I have the feeling that he has not much of a chance with Crawfie. ^.~ Hehehe... but the little citrus scene was quite delicious (even if C/K. No, I have nothing against that pairing but, you know...).
Schu: *mumbles* We always knew Pandora's a hentai... *grins*
Pandora: *death glare* Anyway... I enjoyed the chapter very much. Especially the interacting between the characters. ^^ *whispers at you* And that citrus made me even more waiting for a certain scene, you know what I'm talking about, ne? ^.~
Yohji: Pandora loves us. ^.^
Schu: She's addicted to us. ^.^
Pandora: -_-' ... *growls* And Morgana-chan, tell that muse of yours that I'd love being your twin but that gives him NO right to grope any of us!!! *fumes*
^_~ |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 07:48 CDT
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Yep, bed action...we want bed action, but not only between Schu and Yohji^^...that's my opinion ^___^...you know what I mean, ne. But I know, I know...it's too early for bed action with Ran x ? anyway ^_~.
What, I missed a chap...how is this possible ?_?...well, sorry...I didn't know I missed it! Oh yes, I enjoyed it (the chap where they found Ran)...like I imagined it to be ^___^!
Aaawww cute...Ran is sleeping with his head in Crawfords lap...am I right...how kawaiii ^_^! Such a lovely scene!
Ja *till next chap ^.^*
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 06:22 CDT
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Pandora: Uhhh, the beginning was quite scaring. *shudders*
Schu: Awww, poor girl. Do I have to shelter you? ^.^
Pandora: -_- *smacks Schu and smiles at you* Anyway... Good chapter, Morgana-chan! Exciting and suspenseful as always. ^_^
Schu: What did you expect? Fuuma knows how to give nice ideas after all.
Pandora: I don't know if 'nice' is the right word considering his inspirations.
Schu: Whatever... I'm looking forward to visit Morgana and give her some nice ideas myself. ^.^
Pandora: *sighs* Poor Morgana-chan... I rather look forward to the next chapter. ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Miss J On: August 05, 2003 04:48 CDT
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INTERESTING |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*remembers the two nice Japanese at the airport and tries not to drool but to concentrate on the review* ^.~
Way!!!! Another enthralling and awesome chapter! I love this story, I really do. ^^ You describe the characters so vivid!
And about sweet Schu-chan's eye colour: I think they're actually blue or blue-green. Sometimes they seem to be green and in a lot of fictions they are described as jade green (well, I used that colour myself ^^') so I think you can use all of those tones. ^^
Oh, and tell your darn, hentai muse the following: FORGET IT!!!! *sticks tongue out and runs back to work snickering * |
Reviewed By: Simply_Kim On: July 31, 2003 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. MY. GOD.
Those pictures... those were so gross! WAH! I dont think I could ever sleep tonight... the BABY was BAKED with CONDIMENTS and ALL?! AAAAGH!!! *gasps for breath*
But still, it's interesting to know what would happen next... and will Ran EVER be with BRAD?! *drumroll* I hope so! ^___^ Wishing you luck on the next chapters! ^___^
hugs,
KIM ^_^ |
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