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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 11:07 CDT
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Loved this chapter. I still remember it and am glad you're continuing it. Hope the next chapter is out soon. I'm so anxious to see how everything turns out.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 10:34 CDT
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Haha, well I'm just happy to have read a new chap of this beautiful fic! But ugh, Aya-chan *gah*, I could strangle her Ò_Ó. Well done!
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Reviewed By: Megami Layla On: February 06, 2005 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Please update soon! You can update as a birthday present! ^__^ I can't WAIT to see what happens next. I had a heart attack when Schu-bear jumped out of that car. Thank goodness he is okay. You have a great writing style and your originality for this story is quite wonderful. Keep up the excellent work and be sure to update soon! You have loyal fans behind you my dear!
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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: January 10, 2005 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It was definitely worth the wait. This was an amazing chapter. Please... please... please... DO NOT write Ran's death because I will just die with him. After all he has been through, if he doesn't make it... I don't even want to think about it. I just heard this rumor and must vote against it. Anyway, love this fic. Please continue... I can't wait to find out what happens next... ^_^
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 13:46 CST
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Thanks for updating. It was worth the wait. I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next. And you mentioned in your comments that Ran might die. NOOOOOOOO!!!!! i simply can't handle that. You've got 2 great pairings here. YoujixSchu and BradxRan. You must continue it so I can enjoy it since they're so rare!
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 05:13 CST
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Just knowing that a new chapter is online makes me always smile ^_^! I'm ok. And your fic is still beautiful, I like! *huggles* ^.^
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Title: Wow and Yay!
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 02:53 CST
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So great. To be honest...I'd forgotten about this fic >_< So sorry! But, then I saw it and remembered and was so terribly happy that you put out another chapter. I watched the CSI marathon as well. The show is awesome. Teaches me how to better commit a crime and not get caught ~_^ Anyway, thank you so much for the update, this chapter was tense and amazing and wow!! Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: indentured On: August 27, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...i like the idea of this fic, altho it would probly be a bit more engaging if u had made the murder case a bit more twisty and left a reason for the audience to come back besides the sex, ncs, and hot main characters. Nevertheless, it is a VERY commendable piece of literature, and i especially like ur character development of aya, crawford and takatori. Ur grammar needs SERIOUS work, tho!~it truly detracts from the story when a reader has to insert pronouns, alter verb tenses and still try to fathom wut the story is getting at all at the same time. Overall, nice story--luv how it involves such a unique plot--nice detail, and great job of bringing to life the emotions. UPDATE REALLY SOON!~this fic will haunt me, til ya do. lol ps...awwww...omi and nagi get no play in this ficcy...chibis...how cute.
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Reviewed By: seth Sefarina On: August 15, 2004 08:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It be sehr nice. Me likes a lot. Please conyinue. I've been seriously waiting for you to update. Thanks for updating this chappie by the way. Great fic. Keep up the good work. And did I say I love Crawford/Ran? Well anyway I LOVE THEM BOTH SO MUCH!!! Pleez update...
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Reviewed By: kato_c On: August 13, 2004 10:24 CDT
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I'm glad to see a new chapter. made me very happy, but now that it's getting so good I want more more more! Hopefully it'll be soon. Oh and where is this bradxran lj community? Is that the only place you'll post your fics? Or will you post them here as well?
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 05:45 CDT
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Ack, while reading the scene with Ran and that ugly guy I felt shivers ran down my spine. *smiles*...there ^.~ ~Ko-chan~
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Title: Borderline
Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 08:34 CDT
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I love this fanfic. You put so much detail into your writing making it feel like I am really in it. I love this mystery. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: June 17, 2004 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. Kudos to you for your creativity. I was very excited when I got an email that you had updated. I immediately had to read it. Keep up the good work. :0)
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 12:21 CDT
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 12:19 CDT
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And again...*smile*...damn, couldn't suppress the smile creeping onto my face again when I got the mail that you posted a new chap ^_____^...not that I'd want to suppress it anyways *grin* ^.^ I so knew it *sobs* poor Rannie, oh my...Schuldig and Yohji are sooo going to "pay" when Crawford finds that out
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